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02/28/2006 12:41:54 PM |
Hi! Hereâs a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Very busy. My eyes kept searching for a point of interest. Thenâ¦what a lot of AC units!
Composition:
Very busy. May have been cropped to tight. Move back or a wider lens would have put the building in more context with itâs surroundings, with out losing the âgreedâ feel.
Subject:
May have fit under âGluttonyâ better that âGreed.â Donât know what the building was used for. Good eyes for seeing such a monster usage of AC units.
Technical:
Focus is soft and picture a bit grainy. 800 ISO would not have helped with the grain. Sky is blown as well. Green light creates a hot spot. Given the drab colours, and the lighting conditions, a B&W version may have been more effective.
Summary:
Good capture of the theme.
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02/21/2006 06:32:36 PM |
Great shot. A winner. Fits message perfect. |
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02/21/2006 05:33:32 PM |
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02/20/2006 12:35:38 PM |
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02/19/2006 05:35:02 AM |
Composition: 5
Technical: 5
Creativity: 5
Appeal: 3
Challenge: 1 - The term "Shoehorn" comes to mind ;-)
Overall Score: 3 - (weighted - NOT a calculated average)
Definitely an intersting photo!
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02/19/2006 12:49:50 AM |
lol. What a beautiful find for this challenge. Bumping up. |
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02/19/2006 12:19:40 AM |
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02/18/2006 11:01:24 PM |
very interesting take on 'greed'...maybe would have been better in b&w?? |
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02/18/2006 10:49:00 PM |
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02/18/2006 10:40:44 AM |
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02/17/2006 09:58:32 PM |
This is just amazing..... |
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02/17/2006 09:50:41 PM |
lol - What is this - a freezer from the outside :-) |
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02/17/2006 08:05:09 PM |
I can't detect any sort of obvious editing in here. Point and shoot? The concept is good, and it's an okay photograph. |
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02/17/2006 11:35:03 AM |
Very funny. I like it even though it is really ugly! |
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02/17/2006 11:26:19 AM |
i like this its cool where did you find this? |
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02/16/2006 09:55:40 PM |
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02/16/2006 05:44:22 PM |
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02/15/2006 08:57:49 PM |
This feels more like gluttony to me. Thing in excess. ;) |
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02/15/2006 05:22:06 PM |
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02/15/2006 02:58:23 PM |
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02/15/2006 03:04:05 AM |
What a cool building. I just have to know what it is and what the hell all those aircons are doing! |
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