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03/07/2006 09:57:58 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club ...
This is a very interesting shot. There's a lot to look at. I like the buildings and the "courtyard" area. It fit's the challenge and the toning is nice.
I do notice 2 problems, though, which kind of jump out at you. First, the tree on the left is distracting. It's dark and big and cut off the image. Sliding your position to the right possibly would have gotten rid of the tree all together. Second, the sky is very bright and featureless. Our attention is usually drawn to the bright parts of an image, which in this case would be right up and out of the image towards the blank sky.
Overall, well done.
milo |
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02/28/2006 07:58:05 PM |
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02/28/2006 02:50:55 PM |
| Must be East coast, maybe NY, interesting |
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02/27/2006 09:42:52 PM |
| Stark, moody image with fine detail |
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02/25/2006 09:44:13 PM |
| I like the buildings and the smaller trees... I am not sure what the trellis structure is in the center but it is pleasing to this composition.... the large tree on the left is distracting and pulls my eye away from the rest of the shot.. |
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02/23/2006 07:25:21 PM |
| Tree in foreground makes the composition too heavy. Also snow detail could have been improved by more dodging of highlights and burning of shadows. Overall a nice attempt at linear composition. 6 |
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