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03/02/2006 05:21:58 PM |
Would've had a little more contrast, just so the detail in the booth itself stood out a little more, IMO. But overall a good shot, I like the way the background blends so the patterns don't draw too much of your attention away from the booth. |
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03/02/2006 01:14:49 AM |
*Critique Club*
"Payphone in Newark, NJ" does defiantly fall within the Duotones challenge. One thing that is great is I do believe this was the only phone as opposed to when you see the same shot over and over.
The image itself is interesting and look like something on a book cover or the news. I really like that our focus in on the phone and how soft this makes the background look. I don't mind that it look like horizontally the box is leaning but I think it may have scored a little higher with the vertical being straightened, but maybe that is what you were trying to achieve. This challenge was so huge I think it is really hard for voters to go through and give the time they would want to, to each piece. Also even though we were looking a Duotones I think people were also looking for something is very striking and possibly more contrast. This is really a great first challenge entry and I am sure we will see many things to come from you. Keep up the good work. |
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02/28/2006 07:10:46 PM |
Well, the contrast is nice on the image. The patterns in the background give it a bit of a tonal range. I found the image to be kind of boring, though. Just want to encourage you to think about what you are shooting, and asking yourself if it is interesting to a large amount of folks. |
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02/24/2006 01:15:49 PM |
Very nice. The duotone works well to minimize the distracting patterns and colors into a single harmonious mess. |
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02/22/2006 11:18:03 AM |
Weems very photojournalistic. I like the reality of the image. Nothing hidden or embellished. |
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02/22/2006 06:58:52 AM |
the phone is a bit overexposed, IMO |
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