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03/09/2006 11:32:12 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hello! This photo is interesting in several aspects to me but also bothers me in others. Let's see if I can explain myself in words here, LOL :)
I like the idea, man and nature, an odd coupling to be sure in this respect. So it certainly fits the challenge as they say. I like the stark trees in the background, it adds to the idea of how man might effect nature in ways.
But what bothers me about the shot is the composition. Yes, the lamp is centered and straight but the trees aren't and while it may add to the odd element, it, personally bothers me in that the shot looks crooked but not looks crooked. I guess this can be a good thing in that it made me look at it longer during the challenge to try to figure out what about it that bothered me. It was mentioned in one of the earlier comments that the lamp has the potential with the curves and such to really make this shot work and I'm thinking the same thing. Use the rule of thirds, take the lamp to either side and change your point of view in that you come more from one side or the other, using the curves to help with the continuation of the leaning tree branches, leaving a more subtle line for the viewer to follow rather than the rigid straight line of the pole.
Also if you could get the pole to stand out just a bit more, the color, really show the contrast and oddity of man to nature, colorful to dull type contrast.
If you go back and reshoot this I would love to see the results.
Hope my comments help and good luck in future challenges.
Deannda |
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03/05/2006 03:45:01 PM |
| I find it slightly depressing for some reason! - Not sure what to say about this, the subject doesn't really make me think, I don't find it very engaging. However, it is in focus, and the composition.... well... It's centered; not sure if that's what I find unsettling about it. |
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03/04/2006 12:37:21 AM |
| Great winter scene, might be a bit of a stretch for some voters, but I thinks it's a super shot. |
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03/03/2006 05:01:00 PM |
| I like this shot alot but it is a stretch for me... nice job... :) |
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03/02/2006 03:32:34 PM |
| Sadly, there is nothing in this photo to really grab my attention. I don't really get the "odd couple" thing and it's just kind of drab. Sorry. 4 |
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02/27/2006 03:50:50 PM |
| So you are calling the trees and the lamp a couple?? I don't get it.. doesn't say couple to me at all :-( |
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02/27/2006 01:50:55 PM |
| An interesting take on the challenge with potential for good design. Unfortunately, this just isn't an interesting photo to me. The light isn't shown in a particularly compelling way. It has potential as interesting subject matter in the curves but this angle doesn't exploit that. A central placement of the subject matter is generally not the best choice either. The light is competing with the busy background of the trees. If you had perhaps shown the lamp in contrast with a single tree this might have worked. I don't think it was the best pairing to start with though. |
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02/27/2006 08:21:54 AM |
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02/27/2006 07:14:10 AM |
| Very neat interpretation - Definitely assisted yet not dependent on the title - For man to "get" the image is tough because he's drowning in it. I really like the hues and texture and juxtoposition here. 8 |
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