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03/30/2006 01:42:16 AM |
*Critique Club*
"HARD ROCK, SOFT WATER" does meet the qualification of the 2 second challenge. I think you had a great idea in trying to capture a close up of the water and its movement.
Looking at the image, it seems over exposed. The colors are a little too bright, especially on the leaves the almost look unreal. The timing of the water was nice. I think the shot is framed very well. You left the leaves in the shot, which allows you to stand out from the rest of the water/waterfall entries. Also the focus seems a little off, possibly the camera was not on a sturdy tripos while you had the 2 seconds going.
Unfortunately I really think the exposer hurt this piece. But I was looking at your portfolio and based on your work, I really have to wonder if you wanted the shot to look like this. Even more so since you named the piece HARD ROCK maybe you were trying to go with an edgy/harsh piece. |
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03/26/2006 10:06:37 AM |
| Good but a little bright for me in spots. |
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03/25/2006 03:32:36 PM |
| I feels that it's slightly over exposed. Should have burn some of the areas slightly. |
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03/24/2006 01:33:16 PM |
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03/23/2006 04:42:48 PM |
| gorgeous super perfect a winner! |
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03/23/2006 11:47:45 AM |
| The color of the leaves is a bit unnatural. |
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03/23/2006 11:36:08 AM |
| water is a bit too bright ; little tree doesn't really add to the composition. |
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03/21/2006 05:23:04 PM |
| Yet another waterfall. I think I would like it better without the green leaves. |
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03/21/2006 10:59:15 AM |
| The rocks in this picture look too soft and the color balance seems off. |
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03/21/2006 09:04:19 AM |
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03/21/2006 07:24:21 AM |
| Overexposed, this shot definately needed a smaller aperture, a lower ISO setting or a ND filter (or just to be taken at a different time of day). Nice try though but watch your histogram next time. |
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03/20/2006 04:13:31 PM |
| The composition is ok but the shot is overexposed. |
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03/20/2006 01:44:51 AM |
| quite washed out and blurry...sorry |
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03/20/2006 01:04:39 AM |
| It feels and looks like it is a little over exposed..... |
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03/20/2006 12:11:38 AM |
| I find like the composition, but the image is touch overexposed. Perhaps a ND filter would help cut out more light. |
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