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04/06/2006 09:16:36 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Your photo is a well done tribute to the original, and an excellent photograph in its own right. Regarding the features of your image specifically: overall, composition is wonderful, with the subject slightly off centre and weighted toward the bottom of the picture in a pleasing way. Bokeh is perfect, and, needless to say, the colour is spectacular, truly one of the most pleasing elements. I like your version's slight emphasis on the bulb's threads, which add interest, the highlights nicely offsetting the splash of colours behind.
I understand it's almost unavoidable at this exposure, but grain is noticeable in the colour background, which, for such an abstract composition, would not have suffered from aggressive noise reduction in NeatImage or similar. However, it could be said that the grain enhances the effect. There is lens debris or dust on the lightbulb (on the orange portion) that should have been cloned out.
Minor points all, and your photo is not diminished by them. A lovely image. Congrats!
I hope this has helped,
Louis |
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04/03/2006 08:24:49 PM |
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03/31/2006 06:57:44 AM |
WOW Tommy, great job!! I'm truly flattered. You made my day. |
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03/31/2006 12:32:27 AM |
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03/30/2006 04:37:37 PM |
Another great image to pay tribute to. This is as good as the original and that is say quite a lot. |
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03/27/2006 06:56:15 AM |
This is a great tribute and I hope it does well....."WOW" factor from me..... |
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03/26/2006 01:33:54 PM |
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03/25/2006 04:40:54 PM |
I really like the colors in this one and the focus is great. But the lightbulb kind of gets lost in the background. Great job though. |
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03/25/2006 02:53:30 PM |
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03/24/2006 07:35:43 PM |
Looks truely in focus ... |
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03/24/2006 05:35:43 PM |
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03/24/2006 01:46:04 PM |
A lovely rendition that competes with the original. Bumping up. |
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03/24/2006 11:01:57 AM |
Great colours. Good luck, it's one of my favourite. |
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03/24/2006 02:05:14 AM |
excellent bokeh...great colours |
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03/24/2006 01:25:07 AM |
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