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04/11/2006 11:58:51 PM |
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"Twin Boys Find a Puddle" is a nice entry into the Playtime challenge. I have been around a few twins in my life at about this age and I think the picture is appropriate for the chaos that I felt at the time.
I think you had a very different idea and approach to the playtime concept. Unfortunately I really don't think the voters liked the chaos shot. I think maybe the composition is the hardest part, we obviously have the puddle but we really want to see more. The colors are great and attention grabbing. I think I felt incomplete on this shot while voting since the focus seems to be the puddle but its a little confusing. I think your concept was a great idea. |
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04/04/2006 08:08:10 PM |
| Nice colors and composition |
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04/04/2006 11:32:21 AM |
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04/03/2006 03:54:41 PM |
| Nice idea. Twin faces and focus on faces/eyes would be better. |
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04/03/2006 09:19:21 AM |
| very cute. only problem is the lil boys face is blurry. but still very cute |
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04/01/2006 01:12:50 AM |
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03/30/2006 02:44:34 PM |
| Boy IMHO this really has problems as far as what you're trying to show. The boys? Only half of one of thier faces is visible and it's out of focus so I really don't think that's where you were trying to put your emphasis. Puddle? Not much of that showing either. |
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03/30/2006 07:53:27 AM |
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03/29/2006 08:23:44 PM |
| Would love to see some action here. |
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