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08/16/2003 07:06:53 PM |
*Critique Club*
I really loved this the first time I saw it, and I still really love it. I don't think it's too dark at all. I think that the teeth just peeking out of the darkness is perfect. Maybe a little light for an eye would be cool, but I'm sure this wasn't exactly a piece of cake.
The focus is dead on. I really like how the background is blurred a bit and the focus on the dino is very crisp and sharp.
The lighting is wonderful. I think that it makes the photo.
Angle and framing/cropping are also great. I wonder though if there might be a little too much space on the right. As a photo, it seems unbalanced, however, it's not suposed to be a photo, it's suposed to be a movie, and maybe it works just fine as is.
Not really much more to say, I wish I could offer more in the way of improvement, but I really do like it as is. Even with the bonus time I get to spend with this shot, I believe it's still a 10 from me.
Great job. ~Heather~ |
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08/10/2003 11:51:33 PM |
| This seems a bit too dark on the right side. |
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08/10/2003 10:39:12 PM |
| Run everybody. Watch out for the teeth. Beautiful lighting. Incredible compostion. Love the letterbox frame. |
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08/10/2003 04:03:04 PM |
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08/10/2003 06:26:46 AM |
| Nice choice. The moody lighting works really well here. Nice sharp focus, good colour, good luck. |
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08/08/2003 05:53:03 AM |
| Wow.. Letterbox... good touch |
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08/07/2003 03:11:07 PM |
| a little more light on T Rex would have made a better impact. The right side of the photo is too dark IMO. The composition is good and I like the colors. |
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08/07/2003 02:58:14 PM |
| Nice work, good theatrical lighting - interesting use of border to create a widescreen format. 8 |
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08/07/2003 10:42:16 AM |
| I like dark, and it certainly emphasizes the teeth here. But this may be just a tad too dark. |
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08/06/2003 12:27:21 PM |
| Really like where you were headed with this just wish you could have just picked up bit of glint / highlight in its eye, not sure if it the monitor, in the office, the right side is really very dark would have liked to see a little more of his neck very sublty seperation from backgound but again it could be the monitor. |
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08/06/2003 12:22:00 PM |
| like this ... the lighting is good.... 10/10 hope you scoring well for this |
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08/06/2003 07:36:23 AM |
| This is perfect. I really really love the execution here. The focus and clarity are awesome. Great crispness on those teeth. The lighting is perfect for a mysterious creepy shot. I think that this represents the movie well. It's even in widescreen. lol. The angle and framing/cropping are excellent. Background is perfect as well. I tink that this is a 10 from me. Good luck in the challenge. ~Heather~ |
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08/06/2003 07:28:16 AM |
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08/06/2003 03:59:36 AM |
| Excellent lighting, clarity & realness. Great job! |
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08/05/2003 05:31:08 PM |
| I would have liked to seen more detail at the top of the head, just MHO |
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08/04/2003 02:34:07 PM |
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08/04/2003 09:37:38 AM |
| Nicely lit, good dof, interesting composition. However, I think you either needed more detail in the rest of the shot other than the teeth, or less detail. As it is, it doesn't look deliberate enough. I think you could have done with a little less negative space to the left... or right, either would have done! 7 |
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08/04/2003 07:05:31 AM |
| I like the black "widescreen" bars. a nice idea. Also a good image. I think the lighitng is effectively dramatic, but it would be awesome with a glowing eye! 7 |
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08/04/2003 12:37:33 AM |
| Interesting effect the border has. The picture, overall is just a touch dark, though that does seem to lend to the tense mood portrayed. |
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