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04/29/2006 04:42:15 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Actually, a good attempt at the high-key look you were after. A bit of dodging on the right side of the bg, would have given it that white isolated look.
Composition:
I think I would have like it more if he were in the right side of the frame or if it weren't cropped as tightly.
Subject:
Clear and isolated from the background well
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: well managed and natural.
Focus: sharp, although I think DoF is a bit shallow.
Light: I really like it. The light, considering what you are working with, is quite well managed.
To grow its vote?:
Perhaps a stronger composition and maybe something a bit more dramatic.
Summary:
Quite a lovely portrait of your son. Definitely a keeper (the photo and your son) :-) Keep up the good work.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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04/23/2006 10:28:42 PM |
| ...too washed out and the horizontal format doesnt work---neither does the framing |
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04/23/2006 09:44:18 PM |
| looks a little over exposed on the right side of his face |
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04/23/2006 06:42:52 PM |
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04/23/2006 04:37:17 AM |
| Returning for comments. Excellent lighting and DOF. One of the more unique photos in the challenge. Good luck! |
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04/22/2006 10:09:04 AM |
| I like the closeup. Good expression. |
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04/21/2006 06:33:27 PM |
| Very nice! Simple and effective. Do find the left side of the photo just a tad too hot/bright. |
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04/20/2006 05:46:18 AM |
captivating eyes! good lights.
cant really say I like the way the photo is cropped, especially the way his hair was cropped off - a little hanging in between. |
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04/20/2006 01:32:07 AM |
| There is a great deal of light on the left side which is saturating the photo. Apart from this great shot. 8 |
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04/19/2006 06:47:20 PM |
| Very professional. Nice one. |
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04/17/2006 03:28:17 PM |
| Love the DOF and your skin tones look perfect. THe centered composition works really well here, IMO. It suits his level gaze. 7 from me. |
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04/17/2006 06:22:26 AM |
| The reflection in his eyes are to disturbing. |
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04/17/2006 01:33:22 AM |
| Nice lighting and focus. Appropriate title too. |
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