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08/19/2003 08:22:37 PM |
*Critique Club*
I wasn't sure if I should do this critique but hey if you wanna get mad at me you know where I am...lol
OK just cause I shot the other side of the hospital did you have to do it directly on? Seriously yes you met the challenge well this time and yes there are right angles everywhere. The color is a little off and it is slightly dark near the bottom although I am pretty sure that is cause you took it close to sunset. Your composition is getting better keep on trying you are getting better. |
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08/12/2003 08:28:27 AM |
| just a building to me.... |
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08/12/2003 01:16:25 AM |
| Very nice. Lots of angles, and they are easy to find. The color seems a bit dull though. |
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08/11/2003 05:28:53 AM |
| Composition is very good. Tweaking with the contrast and brightness would help this picture. Very dark at the bottom and very bright at the top. Evening out the levels would improve the piece. |
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08/08/2003 12:15:55 PM |
| Nice shot, good composition. |
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08/08/2003 04:41:49 AM |
| Looks dull - try on a brighter day please |
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08/07/2003 01:13:10 AM |
| this seem a bit washed out. more contrast would help. |
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08/06/2003 10:22:00 PM |
| a border might've helped here... |
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08/06/2003 11:49:27 AM |
| maybe looks better with the corrected perspective |
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08/06/2003 07:42:09 AM |
| Sure this is a nice picture to look at, (they only distraction I would remove if possible is the people and the vehicles in the lower left corner.) Butt today is the day that the challenge difinition riules, and alothough there are many right angles on the building, I don't get one (or many) that "produce the strength of the image". The strength of the image as I see it comes from the gracefulness of the building, the angles that make it up do not stand out and blend in. Looking at the picture does not evoke the thought 'right angles' |
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08/06/2003 01:07:28 AM |
Composition = 6
Challenge = 7
intellectually I know that's a right angle but perspective wise it's not
Technical = 6
Dark lack of contrast
Creativity =5
X2 Wow factor =5
34/6=5.6
rounds to = 6
congrats
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