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05/07/2006 12:45:06 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Ok you already know from my previous comments i don't think this meets the challenge, but I still think it is a lovely shot.
Composition:
The bird is nicely framed here ..
Subject:
did not meet the challenge ..
Technical (Colour and light):
natual works well here. nice and sharp and a good DOF unless you want the window frame to be used in the shot.
To grow its vote?:
Meet the challenge :) ...
Summary:
Go for it .. your portfolio really shows you are doing well ... I like out of the box pics :)
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/01/2006 12:09:42 AM |
Thanks for the comments.. I guess I was too out of-the-frame box :)
Message edited by author 2006-05-01 09:31:07. |
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04/30/2006 09:09:26 PM |
| Sorry but this doesn´t meet the challenge as far as I am concerned, where is the window? Is it that blurred blob behind the bird? No way of telling. Anyway, just wanted to explain why I gave this a 1. |
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04/29/2006 06:15:09 PM |
| not sure this one counts as "Window framed" |
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04/29/2006 04:21:27 PM |
| Nice photo of a dove, but the "window frame" component is a stretch. To work, the window would need to be more in focus (imho). |
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04/29/2006 01:50:15 PM |
| i see that the bird is framed by the window but i think some folks might not see it this way :( good luck! |
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04/29/2006 12:18:05 PM |
| Window? It is to much DOF in it so I don't think this photo meets the challenge. |
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04/29/2006 10:12:42 AM |
| Nice shot and the first outside window framed entry I have seen. I hope it goes well for you. |
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04/29/2006 05:39:08 AM |
| Interesting look at a different kind of framing! |
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04/27/2006 03:00:42 AM |
Fits challenge=5
Color/lighting=0
DOF/focus=1
Wow factor/uniqueness=0
Attractiveness=0
Kind of hard to tell it is taken through a window, I personally am looking for a window to be framing the object as I think this is what the challenge details were about, I will give you the benefit of the doubt. Good focus and depth of field, keeping the background at just enough blur to add a little color and character. |
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04/25/2006 07:14:33 PM |
| Nice picture but I tend to mark down those that have nothing to do with the challenge |
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04/25/2006 05:41:12 PM |
| I missed the window the first time I viewed this. Nice shot of the bird. |
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04/24/2006 11:51:09 PM |
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04/24/2006 10:16:37 AM |
| Nice image, a bit of a stretch to the challenge for me though. |
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04/24/2006 10:04:44 AM |
| This really has to stretch to meet the challenge, as the window is not framing anything .. in fact it is totally out of DOF. |
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