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05/10/2006 02:28:45 AM |
A Critique Club Visit(sort of)
I believe this may be an unofficial visit since your pic was in my cue and I was trying to gather thoughts on it when the change over came and the photo disappeared but I wanted to critique it anyway.
At first look it does have that "pop" that so many voters love on this myself included. You managed to create a negative image that was very easy to look and kept many details that appeared to not be so negative such as the the silver? plate and the blues come across very natural smooth. The composition is very good as well as how even the light is across the two stars.
A few nit picky things about the photo is that there seems to be some dust on the middle star which was probably reflections and bright reflections but comes across as sensor dust. I think your border works to a certain degree but it appears the thin blue line is thinner on the top and on the rightthen it is on the bottom and left. I also think that the outer black is too thick and even though it was only mentioned once by a commenter I think many voters see a border around this size and may take a point away here and there.
I wonder if you tried positioning the star differently with the point a point pointed directly at the viewer if that would and either wider angle with the front exagerated and close to the viewrw if that would have raised the score abit.
Really this was an excellent entry and it is hard to find too many improvements on what you shot and I think you did an excellent job for the challenge.
Hope this helps and if you have any more questions you can send me a PM. |
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04/30/2006 11:27:57 PM |
| Nice texture. Very sharp photo. |
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04/30/2006 02:58:55 AM |
| who did dallas pick in the draft? |
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04/29/2006 05:41:10 PM |
| I like it, but there is something tha bothers me - perhaps angling it would work better. |
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04/29/2006 03:26:21 PM |
| I like the simple composition. wonderful colors and contrast. |
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04/29/2006 12:52:54 PM |
| Color is great, subject matter not so much. |
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04/29/2006 09:33:46 AM |
| Great choice of image for this challenge. |
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04/26/2006 11:20:00 PM |
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04/26/2006 01:33:38 PM |
| This is pretty cool and I like the original version just as much |
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04/26/2006 10:13:15 AM |
| perfect except for the frame |
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04/26/2006 06:39:55 AM |
| "WOW" this is just great.....I love this effect here in this image..... |
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04/26/2006 06:15:18 AM |
| This is a much better picture in its original colours (yes I checked!) |
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04/26/2006 06:12:37 AM |
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04/26/2006 02:52:58 AM |
| Beautiful colours, great composition, striking photo! |
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04/26/2006 01:52:44 AM |
| Good composition, very nice colours. |
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