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05/07/2006 01:09:16 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
First Impression - the most important one:
Meets the challenge and is clear ...
Composition:
The pot is rather centered ... have a look at some of the tutorials around on thirds .. or composition .. this may help with future shoots.
Subject:
Meets the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
They colours are ok .. the lighting is fine .. but this is almost just a snapshot.
To grow its vote?:
Think about composition .. think also about how to take the challenge to the next level.
Summary:
You are doing well .. keep it up.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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04/30/2006 09:40:38 PM |
| This is a nice idea. Perhaps it would be even warmer if you waited for the sun to lower even more. |
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04/30/2006 03:12:32 PM |
Kinda snapshotty, but nice colors and it does meet the challenge.
Message edited by author 2006-05-01 00:38:16. |
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04/30/2006 11:07:37 AM |
| Composition isn´t working for me, too centered, that and it could use some more contrast and then you would have won me over. Not bad though, gave it a 5. |
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04/30/2006 08:54:04 AM |
| Your subject (the flower pot) is too small for the photo. It really doesn't dominate. |
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04/29/2006 01:10:29 PM |
| the subject there isn't interesting enough and is too centered.. |
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04/28/2006 04:44:48 PM |
| While the view is interesting there is something about the photo that doesn't work for me. I am looking at it and trying to figure out what is disturbing me and I think that one of the things is that maybe you should have played around with where all the items in the picture were in relation to the framed out areas. Also some of the shadows take away from the photo. |
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04/28/2006 08:43:23 AM |
| sorry don't see it, it's just a view |
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04/27/2006 06:50:10 PM |
| Meets the challenge and nice colors, but kind of plain. |
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04/25/2006 07:14:27 PM |
| Sorry I the composition is a bit plain |
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