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05/01/2006 12:03:54 PM |
| Thanks for the feedback. Most of you thought that i should have cropped on the right side and just show the window sil instead of including the outside of the house. i left it because i was afraid that you may not be able to tell it was a window. i did go back and crop it. you were right, i like it better that way too! Thanks. |
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04/30/2006 10:16:24 PM |
| Nice job in the technical department, good colors and sharpness in this one. |
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04/30/2006 09:44:09 PM |
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04/30/2006 08:40:03 PM |
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04/30/2006 12:24:05 AM |
| Very interesting approach. Love the brightness of the tattoo the best. |
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04/30/2006 12:19:37 AM |
| I like the interest in the window! would have cropped at the window's edge on the right and left space on the left so as to put his elbow on the "thirds". But you put his face on the third which is ok too. Extra points for originality... |
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04/29/2006 08:32:59 PM |
| Nice candid. Nothing more then that really. |
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04/29/2006 07:32:19 PM |
| Good picture. The reflection in the mirror is a nice addition. |
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04/29/2006 04:28:31 PM |
| Unfortunate tattoo. Took me a while to realize you were talking about the cigars. The bright colors of the arm really grab your attention. |
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04/29/2006 02:10:59 PM |
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04/29/2006 11:35:35 AM |
| lol, lucky he didn't catch you! Nice use of window framed concept, good candid shot. Good luck, I hope you do well. |
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04/28/2006 07:41:10 PM |
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04/28/2006 04:34:02 PM |
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04/28/2006 01:43:44 PM |
| I like this candid, the relaxation comes out of the photo to me. I am not sure I like the OOF on the brick to the right - in some ways you don't want it to take away from the photo either. |
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04/26/2006 07:50:00 AM |
I loved cigars, back when I smoked. I can smell these still.
But there's a lot more to love here than memories. Very interesting & effective use of the window frame motif; great character in the tattoo and the earring; nice visual complexity in the reflected (?) secondary subject. There's something both comfortable and comforting about this photograph .. as if they are quietly saying "screw fashion and convention; we smoke cigars." Or you're saying it for them, which is even more pleasing. 8. |
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04/25/2006 10:17:53 PM |
| a shift of camera position to the left would have given a little more dimension to tatoo guys face, but then you loose the other smoker guy. So, i think you did the right thing. |
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04/24/2006 09:48:13 PM |
| May have been a more complete shot if you could see the brick around the bottom and left of the window. Just feels cut off weird. Beyond that, good color and sharpness on the man in front. |
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04/24/2006 07:13:46 PM |
| At first I thought the orange siding on the right might be a distraction, but then I covered it with my hand. And you know what? I really felt like something was missing. Good call on including it. |
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04/24/2006 09:01:12 AM |
| The blue of the ink is fantastic...very nice. |
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04/24/2006 06:29:14 AM |
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04/24/2006 06:25:32 AM |
This is good. I like the timing and angle it's shot from.
I am wondering though if it would be better to crop the wall off from top and right .. maybe you left them in for a very good reason ..
Nice work. |
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