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08/01/2006 02:29:20 PM |
Greetings from me! ;)
I see you never received the Critique you requested so here I am, hoping to fix that! :)
This is a lovely picture, I love the mood, the tone, the feel. You said you did lots of dodging and burning and I think some of the dodging might have hurt you a bit, as in you did a great job on the rocks that make the window but the dodging around the model is very noticable and there are lines everywhere around here. I'm betting if that wasn't as noticable you would have been a contender for a top 10 easily. The model is nice, a type of cloak would have completed the picture perfectly. If you redo this, take away some of the dodging around the model I would love to see it!
I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!
Deannda |
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05/03/2006 02:09:49 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club....
It's really unfortunate that a lot of photographers don't bother to fill in the "Photographer's Comments" section when they submit a photo to a challenge... especially when they check the box to request an in-depth critique. I have stopped offering in-depth critique on photos when the photographer chooses not to include his/her own thoughts on the image when they submit it... You might want to consider this in the future.
John Setzler |
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04/30/2006 11:35:51 PM |
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04/30/2006 10:05:31 PM |
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04/30/2006 09:51:29 PM |
| Pretty cool, yes, very medieval and mystical, I like it, only thin is that her dress doesn´t really fit the rest of the shot, would have been cool if you had her in an lord of the rings kind of elvish white gown but that is just nitpicking. 8 from me, great shot. |
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04/30/2006 08:01:14 PM |
| This is very pretty! Love the framing... |
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04/30/2006 05:59:48 PM |
| ooo very nice affect with this one, hope it does well |
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04/30/2006 03:55:45 PM |
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04/30/2006 02:39:18 PM |
| I like this ,compositin and colors are very nice |
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04/29/2006 10:55:20 PM |
hrmm the window is nice, but not sure it works here as such a large part of the picture. It's like taking over the frame.
Outside looks nice...very good idea though. |
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04/29/2006 09:53:38 PM |
| I like the idea, but I think the model should have been a little closer to the window so she would fill the space better. It also looks like the dodge and burn tools were used agressively (at least on my monitor). In any event, the lighting is unusual. |
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04/29/2006 09:17:22 PM |
| Really nicely done, love the idea, good composition, the blue dress works against the background, it really seems like a window into another time. Good luck |
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04/29/2006 03:59:49 PM |
| Very neat. The girl and surrounding grounds almost seem painted. |
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04/29/2006 02:04:30 PM |
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04/29/2006 12:48:50 PM |
| Great choice of window, well exposed, great colors. Only thing that is a bit odd to me is why she'd be wearing that dress in the middle of nowhere. |
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04/29/2006 12:25:57 PM |
| Really like this shot. I would have loved to see a little bump in saturation on the grasses surrounding your subject, that to me, would separate the desat of the foreground. Love the window shooting from and the total concept overall. 7 |
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04/29/2006 12:23:09 PM |
| Would like to have the subject closer to the window to make her bigger part of the photo. |
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04/29/2006 08:20:21 AM |
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04/29/2006 07:26:17 AM |
| I love your choice of untraditional shape of window and the punch of color with the blue is beautiful. |
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04/29/2006 06:15:38 AM |
Different but needs more impact
Your model is almost lost
Points fopr being different |
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04/29/2006 03:22:20 AM |
| Very creative window style. |
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04/27/2006 08:05:55 PM |
| man, she's brave without shoes... |
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04/27/2006 03:56:36 PM |
| lovely location! I think your model is a bit too bright though. |
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04/27/2006 07:04:56 AM |
| this is fantastic...hope it does well for you |
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04/25/2006 10:14:25 PM |
| The contrsat and processing are very good. she does seem a little dwarfed but 7 works for me |
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04/25/2006 02:30:12 PM |
| Nice composition and use of lines here. Your decision to desaturate the photo was a brave one, but works well in this case to move the focus towards the textures and lines... 7 |
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04/24/2006 06:34:11 PM |
| Very nice frame...Lovely image... |
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04/24/2006 12:14:49 AM |
| so beautiful...love the coloring! 9 |
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