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05/10/2006 07:47:07 PM |
From the Critique Club:
First off let me say that I am always honored to help out our younger community members. If you ever have any questions, please feel free to PM me at any time!
Now to your photo. First off I would like to say that you have a very nice composition here. You used the rule of thirds (whether you knew it or not) to give a very pleasing effect. This makes me think that you have some nice raw talent. However, looking at your comments, I see that you took this shot on a windy day. Your shot is very soft and this may be why. It looks like either your focus was off or the flower was moving around a bit giving it a little bit of motion blur.
It appears that you got the exposure here nice and proper. You can tell from the detail in the white petals. It is hard to get such detail and not end up blown out or with muddy greys instead of white. Your whites are a TOUCH dark but not too much. You may be able to fix this in post processing using levels.
I see that you shot this at ISO 400 according to your notes. I wonder why that is? Was it an overcast day? Was it in a shadowy area? Whenever possible, and especially with Point and Shoot cameras such as yours, it is important to use ISO 100 or lower if this camera has it. You will have much less noise in your shot. You can see the noise in this shot in the greens of the background leaves. It looks a bit grainy. The side effect of the lower ISO though is slower shutter speeds which make it harder to get nice shots of things that are moving.
My last question for you is this... Does your camera have a tripod mount on the bottom? If so, you should always always always use a tripod unless there is a specific reason not too. In this example, even with the wind moving your subject, by isolating (making it as still as possible) the camera you make it easier to get a nice sharp image. When I had a camera similar to yours, my photography took off by leaps and bounds when I was given a tripod to use. I would always put the camera on the tripod and use the timer to keep the camera nice and still.
One final thing that probably brought your score down is the DNMC nazi's. Does Not Meet the Challenge will make even the nicest shot score much lower than it deserves. In this instance, I do not believe that the voters saw this as a photojournalism type shot...
I hope you find something here useful. I know it's kinda a lot to digest therefore, as always, if you have any questions, please feel free to PM me or ask in the forums. Whatever you do, take your camera everywhere and shoot shoot shoot... I look forward to seeing you improve with practice!
Yours
TC
Message edited by author 2006-05-10 19:52:03. |
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05/08/2006 03:44:42 AM |
This picture is not at all horrible.
IMO I would have cropped a bit from the bottom. Colours are nice and focus could be sharper but is ok.
I think that the main reason for you to score so low is because of the title not fitting the competition. This is not a catchy headline.
Better luck next time. :-) |
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05/07/2006 10:50:57 PM |
I like the shallow DOF in this pic. I think I would have tried to go even more shallow. I think this photo would benifit from a different crop as the bottom half of this pic leaves me wanting more. I would have tried to emphasize the white petals among the green leaves and the trunk of the tree. Since this is a photjournalism challenge I would have gone with a title such as "Flower and Garden Show This Weekend" or something like that.
All comments are meant to be constructave. Please take them as such. Good luck in this challenge! |
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05/07/2006 07:23:31 PM |
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05/07/2006 06:46:19 PM |
| Nice photo and I gave it a good score, but has little to do with Photo Journalism IMO. |
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05/07/2006 02:11:40 AM |
| Very soft focus. I can't find a center of focus to make the image capture my attention. A better title would of helped since this is a photojournalism challenge. I wish you the best in the challenge. |
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05/06/2006 11:02:03 AM |
Hmmm, this one just doesn't do it for me as a great shot or journalistic.
To me, it lacks focus and seems noisy. Maybe the soft focus was on purpose, but if so, I'd want to see it softer. It either would need to be very in focus or more out of focus to be more interesting. As it is, it is between the 2. It could be cropped tighter too as the bottom part seems irrelevant.
Those things would maybe make it a better photo, but I still think it would lack any journalistic qualities. |
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05/03/2006 07:35:07 AM |
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05/01/2006 07:22:02 PM |
| Not exactly a strong representation of the challenge, I'm afraid. |
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05/01/2006 04:16:27 PM |
| Could be sharper and maybe zoom in a little closer on the flower. I don't know how it relates to the challenge, though. |
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05/01/2006 11:32:29 AM |
| OK, not even an attempt huh? A least give me some cheesy Springtime title. |
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