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Challenge: Rhythm II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Tamron AF 28-200mm f/3.8-5.6 LD Aspherical IF Super II for Canon
Location: Park in Orlando
Date: Apr 30, 2006
Aperture: f/5.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/125
Galleries: Family, Emotive
Date Uploaded: May 2, 2006
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My daughter, Mikayla, out with her dad on a little photo safari.
Converted from RAW with RSE, straighten, levels, convert to grayscale with channel mixer (about red 38%, blue 62%, I think), use HSL to give sepia tint (about 20, 25, +6, again, "I think"), USM, resize, USM, save for Web.
If I could have, I would have maybe included her feet, and cloned out the little dot of light at her chin. Hopefully, the fence will provide enough rhythm for this composition. |
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05/09/2006 02:39:29 PM |
| Very lovely picture, what an adorable little girl! Not a particularly creative take on the theme though. Other than that Bravo! |
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05/09/2006 02:36:15 PM |
| I really do like this photo! |
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05/05/2006 04:35:34 AM |
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05/04/2006 08:04:45 PM |
| Good capture. I don't really like the sepia tone in this one though. It makes it feel to dull for me. - 5 |
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05/04/2006 03:16:32 PM |
| A beautiful child. IMO the child is the primary focus of the photo pushing the rhythm of the fence out of importance. Maybe if the pattern of the fence led to the child and not away the visual affect might have been stronger. Either way it is a lovely photograph. |
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05/04/2006 01:35:47 PM |
| I think she wants a pony! :) I like the sepia for this. Composition is nice too. |
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05/04/2006 09:36:18 AM |
| Poster material. Love the messed up hair of the little girl, as she holds on to the rhytmic pattern of the fence. Great choice of tonal application. |
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05/03/2006 09:48:01 PM |
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05/03/2006 08:43:40 PM |
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05/03/2006 08:05:13 PM |
A very pleasing photograph. The repetition of lines, and the composition where the fence runs from one corner of the frame to the diagonal opposite creates directional movement > visual rhythm.
The cute little girl enhances your theme, because I can actually see her following along the fence line... as kids tend to do. Also she is so small in relation to surrounding contrasts and shapes, it makes a stronger visual statement. |
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05/03/2006 06:05:26 PM |
| WONDERFUL SHOT! LOVE THE TONE! 10 |
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05/03/2006 09:54:24 AM |
| I like the symbolism. The tones are very good as well. |
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05/03/2006 05:05:05 AM |
| It's a portrait to so great an extent as to detract from the effect of the rhythmic elements. I think I'd like to see her smaller for the context, with the top of the post behind her included in the picture. Maybe a bit more included out to the left as well, like a time-line that would fit your title. Lovely model. |
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05/03/2006 03:46:51 AM |
| This a nice capture. Sepia tone has given it a classic look. good |
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