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05/27/2006 05:53:20 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting shot ... I want to know what he is saying though, I think it would be interesting.
Composition:
the falcon hits vertical thirds but I am not sure this is intentional or not as the rest is very centred.
Subject:
Meets the challenge extremely well ...
Technical (Colour and light):
The DOF is good and well used here ... I thin kI would have liked less of the guys body and a tighhter crop on his face and the bird to create that forceful image those birds have.
To grow its vote?:
Not too sure .. different cropping .. slightly different angle .. hard to tell .. I think you did really well with this shot though .. it was a tough challenge.
Summary:
Well done, keep it up you are doing great!
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/15/2006 03:49:12 PM |
| Nice capture; the blurred background really makes the subject stand out. |
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05/15/2006 11:26:42 AM |
| Nice DOF. I notice many of the nouveau riche in my area are buying cats and dogs. Perhaps if they also acquire raptors we will have some sort of envionmental equilibrium developing too. ;-) |
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