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06/04/2006 02:48:02 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Technicals:
Nice job exposing this one. You can see the rings have depth to them and aren't blown out.
Subject/composition:
Good subject to depict heat. I like the tight crop, which adds an artistic aspect to an otherwise dull subject.
Suggestions for Improvement:
The only thing I'm not too sure about is the negative space at the top. It really doesn't do anything for me with this subject or how I read this photograph. So I'm wondering if maybe a square crop would be better or shooting at a higher angle so more of the rings filled the top?
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05/28/2006 07:11:23 PM |
| One of the best of the stove shots but not overly interesting. |
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05/25/2006 01:41:08 PM |
| Good, simple, uncluttered illustration of heat. Negative space works very well. |
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05/23/2006 01:26:16 PM |
| Nice shot, I would have liked to have seen the entire burner without cropping the sides off, but I like the contrast of the red against the deep black. |
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05/22/2006 06:24:04 PM |
| Nice effect with an excellent result - 7 |
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05/22/2006 03:30:55 AM |
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05/22/2006 12:28:45 AM |
| i like this one...very simple! 9 |
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