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to Lonely be
to Lonely be
klstover


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Failure (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Konica Minolta DiMAGE Z10
Location: Richmond VA
Date: May 22, 2006
Galleries: Emotive, Digital Art
Date Uploaded: May 22, 2006

 and after all this time i see
the joy of life has gone from me
my face is empty, saddened, worn
my heart is broken, wretched, torn
my friends have left me, on the shore
of life eternal, evermore
to lonely be
and always flee
the demons of my mind






The photo is based on this poem I wrote. The first person POV does not mean me, just in case anyone's getting worried. :-) But, the challenge says not to photograph something and make it look like a failure, but photograph something that *represents* a failure. So I'll just say that yes, I do find something of myself in the poem.



curves
auto color
hue/saturation
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Statistics
Place: 111 out of 129
Avg (all users): 4.1589
Avg (commenters): 4.3636
Avg (participants): 3.6458
Avg (non-participants): 4.3072
Views since voting: 774
Views during voting: 282
Votes: 214
Comments: 11
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/30/2006 09:36:21 AM
Sorry but too dark/blurry/bluish for my taste, not aesthetically pleasing. The reason why I am saying this is I make it a rule to explain when I give low ratings, wich is what this got from me.
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 05/26/2006 06:02:20 AM
ummm... I dont know if this is intentional or not but the picture is not in focus. Not of my taste. 4.
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 05/25/2006 02:42:49 PM
Interesting idea here, but noise takes away from it. Blue color works well.
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 05/25/2006 11:28:13 AM
the composition is very nice but the double exposure is kind of annoying.
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 05/25/2006 01:42:07 AM
You produced an interesting image that has a cool composition, but I have a hard time realting it to failure. I like th blue hue and the lighting is great.
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 05/24/2006 11:36:31 PM
I see failure only in your title.
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 05/24/2006 04:38:05 PM
that looks like the moon.
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 05/24/2006 04:25:21 PM
I think you were using the blurriness as an added effect to being lonely, but I think it took away from the photo. First thing I noticed was two eyes on the same side.
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 05/24/2006 04:05:54 PM
without the title,IMO it appears to be a photographic failure,& would have fitted the challenge well, but the title killed it....5
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 05/24/2006 12:06:54 PM
not sure what this has to do with failure
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 05/24/2006 12:57:58 AM
It seems a bit blurry and grainy to me. I like the colors, but wish I could see the loneliness on her face in greater detail.
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