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06/04/2006 03:48:34 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Wow .. always like these shots ... does this mean though that too many people do this?
Composition:
This is a very centred shot. Working towards the rule of thirds would help to create a different point of interest ... or taking a look at how to create a golden tringle ... something to take away that centre focus.
Subject:
does it meet the challenge .. well it does if you are trying to successfully do a stop motion shot. But others may not see it that way .. which is why I think there are a few DNMC type votes.
Technical (Colour and light):
This is really an amazing colour ... it has a great depth as well. so very unusual. It is reasonably sharp and the lighting used here is perfect.
To grow its vote?:
it is becoming a little cliched this type of shot .. but that should never put you off ... but work towards meet composition rules and see if that helps.
Summary:
great shot ... good colours ... I am stunned. :)
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/30/2006 08:55:44 PM |
This is an awesome shot. The only thing I could suggest is that you move the center of the drop so that it's at a point in the rule of the thirds, or a along the line of the golden... Aside from that, however, it's awesome :-)
( The picture/tutorial I'm thinking of is here: //dpchallenge.com/how.php?HOW_ID=1 ) |
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05/27/2006 02:17:36 PM |
| Beautiful sharpness, and color. |
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05/26/2006 05:14:42 AM |
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05/26/2006 12:34:32 AM |
| Wow! Would like to know how you managed the color in this one. |
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05/24/2006 09:01:47 AM |
| i dont see sucess in this but its pretty |
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