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06/08/2006 06:43:30 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Everything looks pretty well focused here, but there are some very strong textures in this one that you could have brought out even more. With a little more contrast, this one could have been even more appealing.
Lighting: I like the lighting. Everything looks very evenly lit, but just a touch flat. Upping the contrast would also remedy that look.
Composition/Content: Very well composed. I have to disagree with the comment by docvorhies. I think that there is tones of interest there, and getting closer would add to that even more.
My Opinion: Fine job meeting the challenge. With some slight adjustments, this one would have scored even better.
Eric
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06/06/2006 11:11:15 PM |
Color great. Framing I would have the whole building in the shot. Not all that interesting. |
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06/06/2006 03:00:53 PM |
Nice choice on the sepia tone, it ages the shot well |
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06/03/2006 10:37:28 PM |
I like the sepia tones re this image..... |
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06/01/2006 01:37:48 AM |
I love the tones and the aged feel. |
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05/31/2006 11:59:23 PM |
The placement of the roof join adds interest. The tone works well. |
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05/31/2006 04:24:19 PM |
There, there's a place
where I can go
when I feel low
when I feel blue
And it's my mind
and there's time
When I'm alone
I think of you .....6 |
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05/31/2006 10:14:58 AM |
I love old abandoned buildings, so interesting. |
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