| Author | Thread |
|
|
06/08/2006 06:33:46 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Great focus, but there is a yellow hue beyond just the yellow of the submarine. It is more strong at the bottom of the frame.
Lighting: You did a nice job with exposure control here, but the shadow at the bottom left of the frame is a bit distracting.
Composition/Content: I think the cropping is just a bit too tight. You need just a little more space between the submarine and the left side of the frame.
My Opinion: Wonderful job meeting the challenge. Coming across a yellow submarine was a great find. With a few slight adjustments, this one surely would have pulled a much better score.
Eric
|
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
06/07/2006 11:04:03 PM |
| I was wondering how someone managed to find a submarine! I like how you used the foliage to frame it and the angle you choosed to shoot from. Seems to be a bit on the bright side. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
06/06/2006 11:39:27 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
06/05/2006 01:11:37 AM |
| nice contrast, well focused |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
06/04/2006 02:17:31 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
06/04/2006 01:29:56 AM |
| what is this? definitely yellow but doesn't remind me of a submarine, especially antennae at top. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
06/01/2006 08:55:33 PM |
Where the heck did you find a yellow sub? Too bad you shot this in such harsh lighting. Your overexposed a little making the yellow look unreal...
TC |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/31/2006 11:26:10 PM |
| is this a actual photo or a drawing in a photo? |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/31/2006 08:02:21 PM |
| Extra point for finding a yellow submarine! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/31/2006 12:57:35 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/18/2025 06:14:38 AM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
