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06/12/2006 04:37:44 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Great tones and coloring in this capture. All the colors are nicely close and make this a very comforting, warm scene. Your focus is also crisp, and your depth of field is superb.
Lighting: I find myself wanting to see her face. I'd like to see it turned just a bit toward the window so that all her features aren't lost in the shadow. I also see what Techo is saying. There is a bit of a harsh change from dark to light on the left side of the frame.
Composition/Content: Flawless. The open door, the lines of the floor, the base board and the blinds all provide terrific leading lines that point directly to your main subject.
My Opinion: I think you did a terrific job meeting the challenge, and you did it in a very creative manner. With a little more detail on her face, I think this one would have scored even better.
Eric
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06/11/2006 11:45:13 PM |
| Very good image. If any burning was done to the left side perhaps the graduation from light to dark is just a tad abrubt, though I do see the white bottom molding almost all the way to the edge of the image. Just hope most of the other viewers will see it as such also. |
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06/11/2006 10:58:20 PM |
| Nice! The only thing that distracts me is the door. Is it open? the lines on the door seem to be at a different angle. Great shot. |
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06/11/2006 10:28:41 PM |
| Not even a chair, because then it would have been two "things", not one, so it definately meets the challenge. I really like the photo, shades of yellow and brown dominating it. Maybe a crop where the full reflection was visible? |
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06/11/2006 10:02:57 PM |
| Would of preferred a tad more lighting in this one. Maybe a reflector of some sort may of helped. |
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06/11/2006 01:22:22 PM |
| Wow! You've achieved an amazing effect |
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06/11/2006 05:22:11 AM |
splinters splinters splinters ;-) At least you picked a warm spot. LOL
Lovely shot. |
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06/10/2006 08:42:39 AM |
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06/09/2006 08:08:14 AM |
| Watch out for splinters. But seriously, I really like the darkness of exposure yets crispness around the shadows. You have to love a photo that leaves you wanting more. |
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06/09/2006 07:51:11 AM |
| Good use of light and shadows. Well done. |
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06/07/2006 05:49:13 PM |
| The distortion from the W/A lens helps the feel of this for me. Well observed lighting (only happens once a day!). |
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06/07/2006 04:21:57 AM |
| Lighting is perhaps a shade strong, lovely idea and excellent angle especially the rectangle of light on the floor. Consider changing the position of the model within the frame to a slightly stronger place. |
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06/06/2006 08:45:52 PM |
| I like the mood here, but I do not feel the emptiness of the room because such a small part of it is shown. |
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06/06/2006 08:07:05 PM |
| Nice image & nice setup... my thinking is that all the shadows makes for too many lost details on the model... and because of that, it losses impact. |
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06/06/2006 07:51:55 PM |
| lol. your title is amusing concidering how many entries are just a chair in the room. wish this were lighter though. the features are lost even the left third of the picture is almost indecernible. i like your angle though |
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06/06/2006 06:02:09 AM |
| great light, but ... i think the photo would proper without the door in the frame |
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06/05/2006 10:49:11 PM |
| I love the way you lit your subject - great shot. |
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06/05/2006 10:00:36 PM |
| Perfectly good image for me. I like the lighting and composition. 9 from me and good luck. Hope you won̢۪t suffer from DNMC. |
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06/05/2006 04:55:29 PM |
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06/05/2006 03:03:49 PM |
| Well done! Dramatic lighting, nice pose and meets the challenge well. |
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06/05/2006 01:38:07 PM |
| Really nice lighting. The door is a little distracting though. |
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06/05/2006 12:15:59 PM |
| Beautiful - The warm colors is key and the light in through the window is spot on! |
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06/05/2006 08:22:06 AM |
| Really nice. No furniture, no clothes, hardly any light - great concept. I love the play of the shadows. Love the title too. Bravo. |
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06/05/2006 02:54:35 AM |
I am I said...
This is excellent...Hope you do well with this |
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06/05/2006 02:09:19 AM |
| a bit off very very fill flash perhaps -2stops or a little fill with polystyrene would have got the wow factor for me 7 |
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06/05/2006 01:55:27 AM |
| This an interesting image .. I would have liked to have seen it in black and white. |
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