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06/23/2006 05:18:47 PM |
---Greetings from the Critique Club!---
My first impression is that you probably got some low votes on the whole "is it a silhouette or is it a shadow" debate. Personally, I did not vote silhouette images any differently that shadow images, but I know some did.
The thick black border is a little distracting. IMO lees is more on borders. The wrinkles in the backdrop are distracting.
The composition is good. I like the way the frame is filled. The diagonal line created by the hands and arms takes the eye across the whole picture. The red tones add a sense of scariness to the shot. Good choice on the color.
I hope this was helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
David
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06/17/2006 02:57:07 PM |
| Somewhat spooky photo. Well done. |
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06/16/2006 07:05:23 PM |
| this looks cool. the red background works well to give the trapped feeling. |
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06/16/2006 10:05:02 AM |
| Good one! Colors, shadows, mood. Nice work. |
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06/16/2006 09:55:10 AM |
| This has a lot of potential. What comes to mind is shadow plays, a la those things they have in Bali. I think this would have been better if there was a story - perhaps meaning two people interacting in some way - making the shadow. The light at the top is a bit distracting too. |
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06/15/2006 07:15:18 AM |
| Hey this is good...well done. |
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06/14/2006 04:45:09 PM |
| Seems like you are confusing silhouette with shadows... they are not the same. Nice image, but your score may suffer due to the fact that there are no shadows. |
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06/13/2006 04:14:14 PM |
| The only thing hurting this photo is your backdrop. If it was ironed and stretched firm this photo would be very good. |
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06/12/2006 07:26:06 PM |
| Captured a shadow. Fits the challenge perfectly!!! |
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06/12/2006 09:13:30 AM |
| is the red boarder meant to be around the subject? |
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06/12/2006 07:30:28 AM |
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06/12/2006 01:01:24 AM |
| Looks like a silhouette to me. |
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06/12/2006 12:26:03 AM |
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