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06/25/2006 05:15:31 PM |
| I keep coming back to this one - I do like the subject choice, but I think it suffers compositionally from the split frame - ie the horizon at the midpoint of the frame. It may be better with the rule of thirds applied. |
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06/24/2006 01:32:11 PM |
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06/23/2006 07:08:35 AM |
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06/20/2006 08:22:41 PM |
| This one would be helped with less forground and a more interesting angle |
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06/20/2006 05:09:02 PM |
| Intersting subject matter and qualifies as desolate. I'm not excited by this though. Maybe a more dramatic angle highlighting a segment of the building rather than this rather straightforward point of view? I think if there were some sort of figure in the foreground, a dog, or cat perhaps, or maybe some abandoned object, this view would work more for me. The expanse of patchy grass doesn't make enough of an impact to me. |
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06/20/2006 01:59:19 PM |
| very cool. glad you went with the b&w. 9! |
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06/19/2006 02:55:32 PM |
| This is a great location for photos. Barring savage guard dogs, I would have cut in for a closer series of photos from which to select on or more for processing. The foregorund needs a bit of cutting here. |
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06/19/2006 12:42:28 PM |
| I think my only comment on this one is that it could have been a 10 in my book by having the subject straiter in frame. That is just me though, and I think you did a great job capturing desolation. |
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06/19/2006 04:37:09 AM |
| Very good, needs something in the foreground to balance the image. Maybe that old fridge.freezer over by the front could have been dragged across the grass! |
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06/19/2006 12:29:39 AM |
| I like the the contrast. Nice post editing. I wonder if you panned back further and made the building less significant. Hmmm - just a thought. |
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