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06/28/2006 01:33:05 PM |
A few thoughts:
1) The subject doesn't take up enough of the canvas. I would have included more or zoomed more so the current amount shown takes up more space.
2) The picture is just a tad on the dark side for a flower shot. I would have tried to boost midtones to pull it up a bit.
3) The part of the bokeh that bothers me is the halo effect on the orange in the background. It doesn't look good to me. You have a nice lens, so I'm not sure where that came from. Maybe the extension tube. |
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06/25/2006 10:27:13 PM |
| I really like the colors! But the center marigold bloom seems to draw the attention vice the one in front. |
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06/25/2006 01:36:01 AM |
| Very nice composition but the main subject is overpower by the background. The bokeh is spot on but the subject really does need to be bigger. |
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06/24/2006 06:08:33 PM |
| Nice, needed to be centerd though, try to shapen it more next time. I gave you an 8 |
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06/23/2006 03:46:29 AM |
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06/22/2006 11:30:23 PM |
| The background is very nice, however, the main subject feels insignificant and doesn't stand out. |
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06/22/2006 04:37:26 PM |
| good use of bokeh - very interesting background! looks like rhubarb stalks! |
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06/21/2006 01:24:57 AM |
| Soft "Bokeh", background that suits the challenge... |
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