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07/20/2006 07:59:55 PM |
I see my comment during the challenge wasn't helpful. Perhaps I should elaborate. The focus is probably fine actually.
But the whole image would benefit from a bit of sharpening outside the camera. Try a USM in PS with the following settings 120,0.5,1 and see what I mean.
I just think that it would be improved if the text was crisper.
Despite my comment, I still gave it a high vote. I like the idea and the composition. The roll of film flowing through the frame is a nice touch. |
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07/18/2006 11:57:14 PM |
Wonderful fit to challenge! |
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07/18/2006 05:58:06 PM |
Focus could bit a bit sharper. |
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07/18/2006 03:26:35 AM |
I wish that the entire film was in the frame, but the lighting is even and well balanced. The only other suggestion that I have is that using a long sheet of paper for the ground and and background because I get distracted from the black and white |
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07/17/2006 11:21:27 PM |
Nice detail and composition. Works very well for this challenge. |
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07/15/2006 06:19:46 PM |
Chessey but the truth...I'm sure film will never die though. |
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07/15/2006 04:02:55 PM |
An OK set-up shot, meets challenge. |
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07/13/2006 11:02:40 PM |
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07/13/2006 04:18:12 PM |
That's not progress, it's change ;) |
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07/13/2006 11:24:15 AM |
Nice concept. There's no contrast with the film against the background. Why have a white base and a black background? The reflection off the film is also distracting. I also don't like the color combinations (yellow, red, black, and the white).
Better luck next time. |
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07/13/2006 08:45:33 AM |
Is this progress - yes it is! Good idea. |
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07/13/2006 07:54:02 AM |
well, i think the opposite of film is sensor and not CF card :-) , ah never mind i cannot know what did you think with this photo , right ? |
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07/13/2006 03:29:49 AM |
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07/13/2006 03:05:41 AM |
Good thought but I think some extra arrangement & angle can made this idea even better!! |
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07/12/2006 05:44:45 PM |
photography has definitely progressed |
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07/12/2006 04:59:52 AM |
Excellent idea and well done. Good composition. |
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07/12/2006 12:48:52 AM |
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