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07/26/2006 10:55:52 AM |
| Great vulnerability to this portrait. Not only is the skin exposed, but even the veins! It is a pretense of vulnerability, of course (drawn in), but it mirrors the real deal. |
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07/21/2006 06:50:40 PM |
| This looks like a snapshot for myspace, maybe if she had been posing differently and not like she was just trying to show the lines and if the lighting had been more interesting, maybe try this with a black background and dramatic lighting with shadows, try setting this shot up more artistically, nice start though, I hope that's not sharpie marker |
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07/20/2006 02:48:11 PM |
| so you just took eye liner and drew all over her to make this awful picture |
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07/20/2006 02:36:05 PM |
| I think darker lighting, or even B&W would have worked better. |
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07/19/2006 11:39:55 PM |
| Would benefit from more creative lighting. |
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07/19/2006 09:38:15 PM |
| I think a darker background would some moodier lighting would have enhanced this a lot... good idea and very pretty model, though! |
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07/19/2006 08:34:07 PM |
| With such a beautiful model and a great idea, you could have been more creative with your lighting and composition to come up with a winner. The lighting is dead-on and flat. She is too close to the background and the depth of field is one dimensional. You could have used all these elements to make your photo more interesting. |
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07/19/2006 06:17:17 PM |
I like the ideea!
But I think the background doesn't work very well in this photo. Also the face of the model seems out of focus (it may be from resizing?). But I like it |
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07/19/2006 03:10:19 PM |
Could have been ALOT better. Marker could have been neater, sharper focus, better lighting.
You had the right idea, just poor execution. |
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07/19/2006 01:31:55 AM |
| The lighting here is a bit way too sharp. Nice model and cool concept though, good luck. |
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07/19/2006 01:08:17 AM |
| "WOW", this is really triffic, and I think this is a self-portrait, and it is is, even better..... Well done, as I really like it a lot, and it really suits this challenge. |
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07/19/2006 12:33:34 AM |
| Great idea, good looking model. Lighting is way to harsh; a flash I guess. Try at least bouncing the flash off of the ceiling to soften it. |
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