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08/09/2006 01:47:33 PM |
greetings from the critique club:
i like the silhouette of this image. however, i don't really see anything "zen" about it, and i'm guessing that might explain some of your score.
some areas of improvement might include straightening the horizon (tilted down to the right), and increasing the contrastinessâ„¢ and saturation of the sky. right now it's just very hazy and flat and doesn't offer much to set off the silhouette.
the panorama aspect ratio is fun, but it's hard to accomplish on DPC because 640 pixels is really not a lot. maybe try it again on the august free study that allows bigger images? |
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08/06/2006 09:20:28 PM |
| Certainly meets the challenge. There's some nice color in the horizon and the silhouetting is good, I really like that aspect and how the more cubical form works with the organic forms of the rocks and sea. I wish the colors were a bit more vibrant, even though its a sunrise as they feel a bit on the flat side to me. The overall focus looks kind of soft, not sure if that's due to the low lighting or not. I gave a 4 |
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08/06/2006 12:54:48 PM |
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08/06/2006 12:22:19 AM |
| Nice use of panoramic. This is serene. |
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08/04/2006 11:00:37 PM |
| The long horizontal sizing works for this image, but it does appear a bit tilted and a bit soft. Colors are soothing. |
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08/04/2006 08:05:57 AM |
| Composition suits this image well..... |
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08/03/2006 06:13:25 PM |
| Not quite feeling the zen in this one. |
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08/03/2006 04:45:25 PM |
| Nice scene. The sloped horizon is a bit off putting though. |
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08/03/2006 12:51:55 AM |
| i like the stark geometry of the architecture, i feel it adds to the zen-ness of your image. Overall the image feels a bit unintendedly soft. |
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08/02/2006 11:22:17 PM |
pretty silhouettes
eat the sun. 5 |
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08/02/2006 01:12:35 AM |
| Just needs a surfer or figure standing on that balcony looking out to sea! |
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08/01/2006 09:15:59 AM |
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