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08/10/2006 01:12:13 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Hi Alex,
Reading your Photographer's Comments I have to say it seems you've managed to make a beautiful picture out of an ugly scene - good eye for a shot.
This submission seems to have met with varied reactions - some like the bottom two-thirds and some like the top two-thirds. Looking at it I think the problem is that it does seem to be telling two stories that don't really go together - the reflection at the top and the rock at the bottom don't go together; perhaps because the reflection is so soft and gentle and the rock is so sharp and harsh.
I think the scene as a whole would have worked better if the rock hadn't been quiet so over-sharpened. This would have lent the whole image the soft diffused feel that the first comment refers to.
I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!
Cheers
Paul |
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08/06/2006 12:49:47 PM |
Can't quite make out the Zen here. |
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08/05/2006 08:19:42 PM |
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08/05/2006 07:30:05 AM |
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08/03/2006 11:49:47 PM |
The perfect reflections give good idea of calm waters. A simple and well executed photo. The muted colors in reflection and concrete hard rock seems to be like reality sorrounded by dreams. Goodluck.8. |
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08/03/2006 09:33:43 AM |
the mind
of a fog machine
must be thrown into the water
to swim. 5 |
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08/01/2006 06:41:57 PM |
7: nice but to be honst I'd rate it higher if the reflection was cropped out! |
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08/01/2006 01:51:04 AM |
Interesting shot! The only negative I see is the rock at the bottom. The rest of the picture has a hazy / dreamy quality and then there is that rock. The sharpness and slight overexposure sticks out and ruins the mood. Maybe a little blurring of the rock would have helped. Otherwise, nice job. |
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