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08/26/2006 10:43:24 AM |
Hello from the Critique Club
Great take on the challenge, this is a very creative idea. The crop used really brings the flame to the forefront of the composition. The right arm is a bit deep in the shadows and a bit more light there and on his chest would have add some definition to that area. If you could have used some lighting you also could have increased the F-stop and reduced the ISO and had a sharper image. At F/4 there is a limit on the DOF and I feel that lost of sharpness resulted in the lower votes.
Overall this is a very good imaged and had I voted in this challenge I would have scored it an 8
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08/18/2006 06:52:43 PM |
| That's really nice, but you dodged the face too much. |
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08/17/2006 10:17:05 PM |
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08/15/2006 06:48:11 PM |
| I would like to do this but with a baseball bat. Do you do it as a double exposure or do you photoshop it in. |
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08/15/2006 05:27:30 PM |
| Nice idea and good execution. |
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08/15/2006 05:02:00 PM |
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08/15/2006 09:28:55 AM |
| I like the idea, gave it 9 because it was different and cool. |
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08/15/2006 07:56:51 AM |
| very , very nice. i like this one alot. interesting POV. 8 |
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08/14/2006 09:04:17 PM |
| Great concept, nice composition. I would like to see the lighting on the man a little crisper. 7. |
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08/14/2006 08:42:53 PM |
| Nice idea, but a bit dark. I would like to see the model better lit. |
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08/14/2006 07:28:08 PM |
Super cool shot. Nice negitive space, leading lines. Oh yeah and FIRE!
Maybe a little soft but overall very cool. 8
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08/14/2006 06:35:34 PM |
| Great composition, good focus and the flames a brilliant :o) |
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08/14/2006 03:31:18 PM |
| Very nice idea and guy even look a bit like samurai. I think would be even nicer to see sword in some kind of action but I guess it was not easy to capture this either. |
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08/14/2006 03:11:35 PM |
| the model is gracefully positioned, aiding the composition of your shot. |
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08/14/2006 02:28:13 PM |
| I like the idea, but wish the comosition was coming more straight on |
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08/14/2006 10:25:57 AM |
| I like the flames on the sword, but wish the face wasn't so grainy ... |
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08/14/2006 08:01:36 AM |
| It's good, nice composition and all, but there's quite a bit of noise in the face |
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08/14/2006 07:01:47 AM |
| I like the lighting on the face, hands and blade. A touch more definition on the right arm would have been nice. A little more downward angle of the blade to align with the V of the face while giving more vertical space for the diagonal formed to extend from top left to bottom right. Still a fine image. |
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