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Lullaby
Lullaby
tcherring


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Challenge: At Rest (Classic Editing)
Camera: Olympus C-5050Z
Location: Sandstone Center - Nampa, Idaho
Date: Sep 18, 2003
Galleries: Portraiture, Photojournalism
Date Uploaded: Sep 18, 2003

This shot was taken in an old building, of a mom and her newborn son. Everything about the shoot was serene and calm, and the mother kept softly singing. It really was a wonderful photo shoot.

Statistics
Place: 19 out of 288
Avg (all users): 5.8927
Avg (commenters): 7.3636
Avg (participants): 5.9194
Avg (non-participants): 5.8624
Views since voting: 1802
Votes: 233
Comments: 24
Favorites: 0


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10/01/2003 01:34:44 AM
Welcome back Tara, long time no see.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/30/2003 11:55:19 PM
Great Use of Natural light-- 10
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09/30/2003 10:19:52 PM
A great idea for the challenge, but remember the rule of thirds when composing a shot like this.
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09/30/2003 06:42:36 PM
That's sweet. Why is she on the ground though when there is a chair behind her?
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09/30/2003 01:38:14 PM
ohh how beautiful ... I love the colors and lighting in this photo, I think the woman and baby should be in the center shot tho
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09/29/2003 02:39:21 AM
A nice scene, but I think a tighter crop with, more or less, just the rocker, the window and mother and baby would have had a more initmate feeling.
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09/28/2003 03:39:51 AM
very beautiful and simple. i love how the light hits both the subjects.
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09/27/2003 08:23:45 PM
Good concept, like the light. Don't care for the floor covering. Need to compress less, there are JPEG compression artifacts that are noticeable. Your file size is only 28k, you should try for nearer to the 150k size limit.
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09/27/2003 12:16:10 PM
This is an awesome photo. One that would be nice to hang. Perfect. Vote 10
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09/27/2003 11:28:00 AM
Very touching
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09/27/2003 10:59:11 AM
A beautiful picture, lovely atmosphere has been captured. It's a shame about the burnt out highlights on the mother's face and the shawl. This is acceptable from the window, but not from the subject of the photo!
I can't help but feel that the composition isn't quite right. I'd have liked the subject definitely not centred, and there seems to be too much negative space relative to the subject. It implies that the photographer thinks that the viewer's eye should spend plenty of time taking in the background, but there's not enough interest there to warrant that. 7
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09/26/2003 08:09:45 PM
I kept postponing voting on this shot because I wanted to give it proper attention. I think it is a very sweet pose of a loving mom and baby. I like the choice of all white clothing, props and background with varying textures for contrast and I like the use of natural light although I think the shot could have been exposed better. The overexposure from the window and on mom's neck and the baby's elbow is unfortunate. Mom's leg seems kind of splayed out so that she doesn't look like she is in a comfortable position. All that aside, I'll rank this a 6 because I appreciate what looks like a reasonable attempt to make a very special portrait. I think tighter cropping, keeping parts of the window and rocking chair, but focusing on mom and baby, and controlling the light better would go a long way toward making this a great shot.
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09/26/2003 02:52:37 PM
I don't think the extraneous background helps. I'd prefer this if it were cropped nice and close to mum and baby, in a portrait orientation.
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09/25/2003 06:20:54 PM
Good concept. With a little more work, it could be really sweet. The window and background is distracting. It looks like you wanted the light to be falling on the baby, but you didn't take into consideration the effect that the background would have. Maybe, next time, if you get in closer, you can cut out most of the background. Also, the baby's color is blown out.
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09/25/2003 04:16:58 PM
top half is great, but that sheet on the floor with the chair on top of it doesn't look right. would look pretty good if cropped way tight
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09/24/2003 10:59:59 PM
I think it would have been better without the sheet. It's a lovely subject well executed.
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09/24/2003 10:09:16 PM
super lighting and focus and subject and composition, I like the chair and floor covering 10+
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09/24/2003 07:13:35 PM
Great shadows, great use of lighting. I like it.
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09/24/2003 01:53:14 PM
another angle, and a tighter shot could have improved this
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09/24/2003 11:06:52 AM
wonderful photo...I love the mood it creates...nice natural lighting...
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09/24/2003 10:11:56 AM
I love the picture and all the cream colors. My suggestion would be to crop the picture to right above the chair. That way you still get the sensation of the sun and the shadows without all the glare.
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09/24/2003 08:18:47 AM
Wonderful shot. Very Good use of ligth. You shouldn´t have cropped the lower part.
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09/24/2003 12:22:21 AM
Challenge met, composition is good, lighting is well done, the only negative I see is the window is a bit too blown out with the light, otherwise a top notch photo
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09/24/2003 12:11:28 AM
Simply stunning. Love the way the light is coming over the shoulder and hitting the baby. Pulls the eye right into it.
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