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Challenge: The Corporate World (Classic Editing)
Camera: Olympus C-720UZ
Location: Enid, OK
Date: Jul 27, 2002
Aperture: F4
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100
Date Uploaded: Jul 27, 2002

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Place: 100 out of 116
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/04/2002 11:12:00 PM
Your colors are pretty dark and drab -- brighten up the picture by adjusting your levels! I'm also not sure what purpose the traffic light plays in your picture.
08/04/2002 10:19:00 PM
Composition - OK
Technical Aspects - good
Meets Challenge - yes
Visual Impact / Originality - ok
08/03/2002 11:51:00 PM
Was there a way to have stepped around or ducked under this sign post? Maybe there is a meaning behind it for you, but I don't think it adds to the photo.
07/30/2002 09:20:00 PM
closed bank? cool
07/30/2002 11:30:00 AM
A pretty average shot of a building, ruined by traffic lights intruding into the frame. You need to find and angle where they dont intrude, or an angle where they become a proper part of the picture, maybe via a long exposure at dusk, or underlining the carved words.
07/30/2002 12:36:00 AM
A different vantage might have yielded a nicer photo - the stoplights and the crosswalk lights are distracting. I'm sure the upper floors of the building must have some interest - a portrait orientation photo might work better.
07/29/2002 02:18:00 PM
I think framing differently to get the lights and stuff out would have put more emphasis on the bank. karmat
07/29/2002 08:20:00 AM
Good subject but I think you could have done more with it.
07/29/2002 07:26:00 AM
Ok, nice picture, but is the clue?
07/29/2002 05:14:00 AM
I lack the technical expertise to suggest what might improve this image; I just know that I find it somewhat uninteresting. The traffic lights definitely mar the overall look for me.


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