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09/12/2006 06:14:37 PM |
tip for shooting with timer: put an object/your hand into the frame where you plan to be during the shot and then press the shutter. in the 10-20 seconds after, since the cam is already locked on, you can casually wander back into the frame and get it bang on.
that aside, nice shot! could have been a bit darker to bring out 'true' blacks.
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09/07/2006 09:49:31 PM |
Loads of potential with that lighting and model. Too bad about the soft focus. |
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09/06/2006 08:47:08 PM |
Doesn't hold enough appeal to me. It needs something to make it Pop more. |
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09/06/2006 04:18:38 PM |
A sharper (more focused) photo would have scored well here. |
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09/05/2006 11:25:11 AM |
Love your use of shadows. |
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09/04/2006 04:53:41 PM |
A little too much of the photo dark on the right side. I looked at it with that area covered and it looks so much better. |
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09/03/2006 07:33:30 PM |
cute. i think the skin tone is too orange though. be great composition. 7 |
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09/03/2006 06:34:49 PM |
Nice portrait... the composition works well with the idea... lighting is excellent on her face... very nice |
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09/02/2006 03:32:27 PM |
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09/01/2006 01:37:42 PM |
I love your idea here, but your entry could use some sharpness & I think your whitebalance was off. |
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09/01/2006 11:24:01 AM |
Composition: 6 - The negative space to the right works well but I don't like the crop at the top
Technical: 3 - It seems way too dark. There is almost no detail in the hair and the eyes especially need to be a lot brighter.
Creativity: 5 - The leaves in the hair etc are a good attempt to make it a unique portrait, but a more interesting angle and pose etc would add interest.
Appeal: 4
Overall Calculated Average Score: 4 |
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