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09/08/2006 02:29:07 PM |
| It's weird that you'd get hammered for not showing the full Beretta M92, but it wasn't shown in this shot in the movie. Seems a little unfair for such attention to detail to result in a lower score :\ |
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09/05/2006 06:45:12 PM |
DOF too shallow. I would have liked to have seen her face in better focus.
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09/05/2006 01:52:31 AM |
| Great set-up ... but All eyes are leading to the tip of that gun ... and it's not there. I'm wondering if the tip is orange or something and that's why it's left out. I'm guessing that will be the main complaint here by voters - If the entire subject was pushed to the right in the frame this would be right on! - rule of thirds and everything. As far as fixing the tip - that would require some spot photo editing .... - or in the case of basic editing ... some stray paint! :] |
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09/04/2006 08:26:15 AM |
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09/03/2006 07:43:03 PM |
| I would like this better if the whole gun had been included. |
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09/03/2006 07:27:47 PM |
| I think you should have taken this picture with higher aparture (e.g. F16), I am seeing the focus on the gun and not on the object, which I think the character her self. |
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09/03/2006 03:35:37 PM |
| Would work better if you could see the front of the gun. |
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09/02/2006 11:33:56 PM |
| I would have like to have seen it framed a little more to the left to include all of the gun and have the subject a bitmore right of center, well done. |
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09/02/2006 09:47:53 PM |
| I think this would be stringer if the end of the pistol was visable. |
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09/02/2006 09:35:33 PM |
| My sister, for years, insisted I watch that movie. I did...I didn't like it and maybe I missed something. The music was good. I didn't understand the movie and I don't understand why you cropped out the end of the handgun. So...I'll say nice photo, pass on voting and leave it to better movie buffs then myself. Good luck... |
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09/02/2006 11:46:00 AM |
| The focus seemed to be on the pistol which has been cropped a little too much.. The right side of the photo looks really empty considering that the subject is looking to the left and is touching the left edge of the photo. 5 for me |
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09/01/2006 10:00:51 PM |
| Only thing I would have prefered is the entire gun in focus. |
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09/01/2006 07:40:20 PM |
| it would have been een better had the whole crop been moved more to the left, so as not to cut the gun out. |
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09/01/2006 03:01:07 PM |
| I don't really like how the edge of the gun is cropped off. |
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08/31/2006 07:02:05 PM |
| Well done, this is great. You perfectly copied the camera angle. |
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08/31/2006 04:59:36 PM |
| shame the end of the gun is cropped; leaving some space to the left of it would've placed it better. |
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08/31/2006 03:14:33 PM |
| very slick, I can't remember the depth of field it had in the movie but it may have been nice to have the face in focus too. Although if my sritique is coming down to the DoF I think you have done an excellent job on the photo and am just nitpicking. looks accurate and bumping up |
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08/31/2006 11:02:20 AM |
| gun is in focus but woman is centered so I think she should also be in focus |
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08/30/2006 01:08:12 PM |
| This would be really good if the shot was moved over just a bit so you could see the barrel of the gun. The shot doesn't seem balanced without it. Otherwise good idea. |
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08/30/2006 10:15:32 AM |
| Having the end of the gun escape the edge of the photo draws my eye out of the image. |
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08/30/2006 09:02:42 AM |
| Good idea but I am not diggin the crop. Losing the front of the gun doesnt seem good. |
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08/30/2006 08:15:52 AM |
| Dodge this! some zoom blur would have been nice. |
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08/30/2006 07:36:01 AM |
| good, nice dof...why the cropped gun...either leave it all in or crop it a tad more...unless I am missing something and this is the way it was supposed to be... |
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08/30/2006 07:12:14 AM |
| the tip of the gun should have been included, DOF should either be shallower to blur the wall or deeper to show more detail in her face |
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08/30/2006 06:47:26 AM |
| Good idea, would have been nice to see the end of the gun. |
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08/30/2006 05:05:52 AM |
| i would like to see the entire barrel in the image and to have her sharp as well. |
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08/30/2006 01:47:07 AM |
| would of been cool if she had darker hair >.< |
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08/30/2006 01:32:30 AM |
| this picture is good, it could've gone to kick ass if i could've stared down the barrel of the gun |
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