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10/25/2006 06:10:03 AM |
Originally posted by BradP:
The smile.
There's always something about a smile that just light up a shot like this.
With some more post-processing to bring details out of the shadows, this would be awesome.
Let me know if you want me to help out on a slightly different edit. |
Hi Rick,
As I mentioned during the challenge, (and nearly forgot),
I went ahead and did an edit of your daughter's pic:
From this  --to this--> 
Obviously having a full-sized original would be better, but for web viewing, this size is ok. |
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10/07/2006 09:07:53 PM |
| Having her forehead highlighted doesn't do her justice, it just seems a little off |
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10/07/2006 09:43:34 AM |
| Nice shallow DOF; I would have her remove her sunglasses. Work with the lighting also - the bright sunlight on her forehead is distracting |
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10/06/2006 06:08:29 PM |
| Wonderfu, casual moment, but the lighting is distracting. I think some fill flash to even out the lighting would be nice |
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10/05/2006 02:16:14 PM |
| Attractive subject, but the lighting is off. |
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10/04/2006 07:28:11 AM |
| the shadows kill this.. she is gorgeous and the lighting on her should be too! |
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10/03/2006 09:49:07 AM |
| The garden location and the bright clear day must have been lovely - an inspiration. I think the model needs a little bit of help with a pose. Perhaps to look more in profile away from the camera. |
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10/02/2006 09:52:21 PM |
| Really need to play with the lighting and shadows to get something more interesting. Also, due to the models position, she is squinting (one eye more than the other) from the sun... try re-positioning the subject so as to avoid this. |
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10/02/2006 07:55:37 AM |
| Very nice! She photographs very well! |
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10/01/2006 08:12:16 PM |
| Pretty lady, nice background blur, but serious lighting issues. Gotta watch the spotty lighting when dealing with natural shade. |
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10/01/2006 05:13:37 PM |
| cute model, but this light is unfavorable |
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10/01/2006 05:12:05 PM |
The smile.
There's always something about a smile that just light up a shot like this.
With some more post-processing to bring details out of the shadows, this would be awesome.
Let me know if you want me to help out on a slightly different edit. |
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10/01/2006 02:16:11 PM |
| Good capture of the skin tones in the model, could benefit from light in the eyes. |
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10/01/2006 01:08:52 PM |
| I find the mix of shadows and light on her face somewhat distracting. |
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