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08/11/2002 08:30:00 PM |
Slightly overcompressed I think. Doesn't really shout out something old to me. |
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08/09/2002 07:38:00 PM |
Cute idea, but isn't this a title thingy? (let's say we remove the title, it seems a little vague, doesn't it?) Suggestion: peek over her shoulder, show us something "good". 6 Swash |
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08/09/2002 02:07:00 PM |
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08/07/2002 12:00:00 PM |
Framed vertically, this would have all those diagonals leading the eye upwards, and eliminate the bush that must have just leant into shot as you pressed the button. |
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08/07/2002 09:59:00 AM |
This is an interesting photo... I think a vertical crop showing the entire child may be better... the exposure level on this shot is a little high as well... - jmsetzler |
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08/07/2002 05:20:00 AM |
love it! sahem about those couple of branches in the bottom right though. |
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08/06/2002 09:51:00 PM |
Please don't take these comments with offense as they represent my honest reaction to the image. I would like to have seen more of the child. Perhaps if framed as portrait instead of landscape I could see more of what the child is doing, which is the theme of the photo. It is a good theme and has very good storytelling, but for me it doesn't work because having the subject cut off like this causes far too much attention to be drawn to the garbage in the background, which isn't interesting and leaves the story of the child somewhat untold. |
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08/06/2002 07:24:00 PM |
i like the idea but don't get spying from the portion of the human selected |
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08/06/2002 03:26:00 PM |
I like the idea -- reminds me of an Andy Griffith episode. I seems a little grainy to me. Maybe a little more contrast would help. karmat |
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08/05/2002 09:44:00 PM |
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject. Composition - ok Technical Aspects - good Meets Challenge - not really Visual Impact / Originality - ok
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08/05/2002 07:53:00 PM |
cute idea. not sure about the composition - too much distracting background |
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08/05/2002 07:22:00 PM |
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08/05/2002 03:29:00 PM |
too many elements in this photo, imo. i was left to wonder if it was a thing or things that were old, or if it was just the act of spying? it's not a bad composition, just cluttered with no clear connection to this weeks challenge. ~mcmurma Aesthetics...5 Meets Challenge...3 Overall...4 |
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08/05/2002 11:24:00 AM |
Along with 'Vintage AM' this picture expressed age indirectly (through technique rather than subject) best in my eyes. The strait edges in the shot seem like they may have been sharpened to much, though I assume you were goiong for the aged looked. May want to rethink that. --10 Agamemnon |
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08/05/2002 10:39:00 AM |
This photo is hilarious! What a great idea for old. |
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08/05/2002 12:25:00 AM |
This would have worked better if you had shown the entire person. |
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