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11/26/2006 10:45:28 PM |
Not sure why the picture has purple hue. Also, the postcard text is too small for reading pleasure. |
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11/26/2006 08:04:41 PM |
Sorry, but this image seems a bit dark and difficult to read, but I like your idea with the border. |
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11/26/2006 05:58:18 PM |
Not quite enough of the building. |
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11/25/2006 04:14:39 PM |
Umm not one of the more interesting Yorkshire scenes... I don't feel this really works as a postcard - too much 'negative space' and the font style,size and positioning doesn't do much to enhance it. |
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11/25/2006 06:22:41 AM |
For my taste, this is a bit too grainy. Also, although I love the composition - it's very nice with the negative space - I have to say I'm not crazy about the frame. The text is difficult for me to read. Again, I do like the compostion, so nice job on that! The dome is quite interesting. |
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11/24/2006 09:18:43 AM |
feel the focus could be better but it is a very good idea, good luck |
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11/24/2006 02:35:36 AM |
Nice coloration! However, the smaller size on the font seems uncomfortably small (to me) given the large amount of negative space...maybe just personal preference. :) |
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11/23/2006 05:49:04 AM |
Very pretty, but I would like to see more of the subject and less negative space. The lettering is difficult to read. Very nice colors on the photo. |
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11/22/2006 08:35:17 AM |
I think you have too much negative space at the top of your photo. And then the border cuts off even more of the subject you do have htere. A little more depth of field would have also helped. |
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11/21/2006 09:06:01 PM |
too much negative space for a postcard |
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11/21/2006 08:54:05 PM |
A bit too much negative space for my tastes... the shopping center seems to get lost in the shrubbery at the bottom. The text is also difficult to read on this one. I think perhaps a bit tighter crop on the building with a slightly bigger font would work just a bit better for this one. |
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11/21/2006 04:34:20 PM |
Nice photograph with pretty colors, but I can't read the font well and I think the empty top space could better be used for the wording. The border is also a bit distracting. |
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11/20/2006 11:24:34 PM |
I'm not voting on text, but I'd never have gotten Meadowhall out of what's on the card -- I couldn't make it out. Nice evening sky and lights on the dome. |
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11/20/2006 10:36:56 PM |
very grainy. Border and font are extremely distracting. Lighting is too dim, and the picture as a whole lacks focus. |
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11/20/2006 10:29:58 PM |
Text is hard to read and the purple color is overdone. |
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11/20/2006 10:10:50 PM |
A little too much sky and not enough of your subject. |
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11/20/2006 03:19:38 PM |
Nightmare - I mean meadowhall ;-)
Nice shot |
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11/20/2006 02:11:26 PM |
Really hard to read font. |
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11/20/2006 01:21:41 PM |
That's a unique framing you've used there. Interesting, and in this case adds to the image. As for the photo itself, I think it's a bit thin on subject matter to sell people on the shopping centre. Tough subject to shoot it looks like from a distance - perhaps a little closer in to showcase the lighting on the facility itself? Anyway, good luck in the challenge. |
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11/20/2006 08:52:23 AM |
bad choice of font, is hardly readable. too much empty space. border is too bold. |
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11/20/2006 01:05:35 AM |
I like your creative use of border, but I can't read the text very well. I like the framing of the centre between the trees, but the image is a bit dark. |
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11/20/2006 12:33:36 AM |
seems lacking in interest |
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