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12/13/2006 11:24:48 AM |
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12/13/2006 08:16:01 AM |
This was a great idea. The only thing I see is the focus could be a little sharper. You did convey your idea very well though. Nice job. |
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12/12/2006 02:56:43 PM |
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12/12/2006 10:56:10 AM |
I like the juxtaposition of the gravestones against the baby store, life beginning vs. life ending. I imagine it's the low light that caused the unsteady hand. If you're comfortable with it you could of used a tombstone to prop the camera against to help steady it. |
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12/12/2006 03:32:41 AM |
the idea was great, but the execution is really blurry through camera movement |
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12/11/2006 10:51:22 AM |
That is a wild composition! I wished something was in focus. |
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12/10/2006 03:27:27 PM |
Everything seems out of focus. |
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12/09/2006 08:34:32 AM |
I'm giving this a pretty low score, but want to make a comment just to let you know that I respect your effort here. The choice of the baby shop sign behind the cemetery was well found - and the title makes sure the viewer doesn't miss the meaning. I like that about this entry. The part that made me vote low is the technical quality above all. It feels like it might've been shot out a car window. Now that I think about it, maybe the flimmery, out of focus look is what you're going for. If that's the case, sorry that it didn't work for me. |
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12/08/2006 04:18:00 PM |
oh wow.. that's messed up to see headstones and babystore side by side... geez... |
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12/08/2006 11:44:27 AM |
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12/07/2006 10:00:23 AM |
Oh...this is perfect if only it were a little better quality. I guess it's ok (the blur) because then I think it would be wrong to be able to read the names of the dead. I'll go with an 8. |
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12/07/2006 07:47:42 AM |
Interesting combination. The blur though really takes away from theimage. |
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12/07/2006 03:49:52 AM |
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12/06/2006 08:11:06 PM |
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12/06/2006 07:28:54 PM |
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12/06/2006 05:45:03 PM |
Interesting perspective..but the foreground is a bit too blurry for me. |
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12/06/2006 03:41:25 PM |
If only you'd...
...taken one step to the left, and angled the camera across so that you had the whole baby shop logo and lost the drain pipe. |
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12/06/2006 02:07:42 PM |
Well now, quite a place to put a baby shop. The interval here seems so short. Good catch. |
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12/06/2006 01:47:59 PM |
everything seems a bit fuzzy but like the contrast in subject matter within the image. |
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12/06/2006 01:14:05 PM |
A good idea, the transposition of life and death. I feel that you could have made more of the framing - it is a shame, for example, that the tall black pinnacle obscures the baby motif. The focus on the gravestones is also off, which means that we can't read the insriptions, and I do feel for this to work it needs the focus to be crisp from front to back. |
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12/06/2006 12:44:52 PM |
Love the idea. The hedge and the tombstones are blurred. I suppose this is part camera shake, and part limited DOF. Using a tripod and stopping down might have resulted in a better picture. |
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12/06/2006 12:33:37 PM |
interesting take on the theme. DoF isn't quite working though, with the very OOF gravestones. |
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12/06/2006 12:25:47 AM |
A bit out of focus -- was this taken from a car? But a really cool idea. |
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