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08/18/2002 11:22:00 PM |
| This is really cool. I like the idea. Depicts something new nicely. Especially with the words "NEW GENERATION" written right on the tube of marbles. The angle is great, I like how the marbles fill the whole photo. The reflecting light is a bit distracting. You could try to put a thin cloth or a thin paper between the subject and the reflecting light and it would help balence it out so it was more subtle. Love the colors too. Good luck with the challenge. |
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08/16/2002 02:07:00 PM |
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08/15/2002 11:00:00 PM |
| Overall, composition is not bad. However, there is too much clutter which is distracting. The good part is it's very colorful and has nice variety (jar, box, plastic bag, etc). |
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08/15/2002 07:50:00 PM |
| Busy, very busy. Very clear shot, maybe a bit dark in places. Suggestion: how about taking the marbles out, display them "in front" (and in focus), then have some of the better looking packages in the background, fuzzed out. Do you see your reflection in the front-most marbles (I like that part!), how about a "field full" of marbles all with your reflection on them? 7 Swash |
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08/15/2002 09:01:00 AM |
I lost my marbles years ago :)
Great shot technically, but the composition seems a bit cluttered. Great colour, sharp and good DOFâ€Â¦
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08/14/2002 11:09:00 AM |
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08/13/2002 10:43:00 PM |
Something new.
Composition - good, pretty busy
Technical Aspects - quite good.
Meets Challenge - yes
Visual Impact / Originality – pretty good
Jim msp
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08/13/2002 03:02:00 PM |
| I'd like this better if something was covering that bar code. Unique concept! |
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08/13/2002 01:25:00 PM |
| Great colors and good depth, but only loosely fits the topic. |
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08/12/2002 09:34:00 PM |
Composition6
Technical Aspects5
Appeal5
Creativity7
Rating6Autool
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