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11/03/2003 08:16:17 AM |
| Great idea. The "shavings" could be a bit sharper though |
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11/02/2003 10:28:58 PM |
| I really love a good abstract, but this is just a little too pure for me. Maybe a closer crop? |
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11/02/2003 09:52:47 PM |
| Great use of negative space. Shadow works well and makes it look like a chain link necklace. |
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11/01/2003 08:40:20 AM |
| Neat idea...I would prefer the shaving be a little darker but excellent concept. |
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11/01/2003 02:10:07 AM |
| sorry just don't get this one at all ;-( |
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10/31/2003 08:51:19 PM |
| Very creative. Interesting subject. Good use of negative space. 6. |
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10/29/2003 10:38:47 PM |
| Took me awhile to see what it was...great |
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10/29/2003 11:07:01 AM |
| The simplicity of this one is superb. Very gutsy submission (10) |
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10/27/2003 08:34:43 PM |
| the shape of the shaving forms a wonderful illusion of "infinity" with its shadow. it's a nice effect, at once solid and delicate. I think I would like it better with less white space, but not a *lot* less. |
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10/27/2003 06:24:53 PM |
| 7. I wish the shaving was more clearly focused. The shadow in this case works well. I would like to see a version with a border, although I know that some have criticized them. |
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10/27/2003 04:56:14 PM |
| A bit too much none-shadow. |
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10/27/2003 12:53:40 PM |
| Very, very minimalistic! IMHO, it is a very good idea, but the pencil shavings are not quite clear, and neither is the distinction between shavings / shadows. The background also is not "pure". It's a great idea, though, and something worth playing with more. Maybe a bit closer, or shavings at a slightly different angle, or light that's a little less strong - I really don't know. What I'm trying to say is that I think this is a good idea, something worth exploring, but not quite there as it is. ~6 |
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10/27/2003 11:13:54 AM |
Very nice idea.
I think your object is to small and the background is to bright.
It is hard to tell the shadow from the object.
This would have been a great entry for "Negative Space".
I think overall a tighter shot and cropping would have helped a lot.
Still a high vote for me. Great idea, and setup just not 100% on the execution. |
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