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12/02/2003 06:18:17 PM |
As a note to everyone who said that this shot had a tilted horizon, I specifically took the picture at about a 15 degree angle to get the lense flare. And if anyone wants to check out the book to get the metaphore that I was trying to present, the author is Clive Barker, the book can be found (I assume) anywhere. Not trying to be rude or ungreatful for the advise that you have all given to me, just trying to clarify that whole horizon thing since most of those who commented on this shot seemed preocuppied with the angle. It does look pixalated, but I hadn't noticed that until the shot was posted, oops.
Message edited by author 2003-12-02 18:23:16. |
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11/18/2003 07:27:04 PM |
| This pic suffers from poor composition (rotated) and heavy JPEG compression. It looks like you had nice lighting without too much lens flare, but the other quality deficits are too distracting. |
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11/18/2003 05:24:50 PM |
| This shot seems to be slightly pixelated. Not sure how it fits the title bc I didnt read the book but again not sure that should matter. |
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11/17/2003 08:31:10 PM |
I'm sorry, I just don't understand how this image correlates with your book title, but it's entirely possible I would have to read the book to know.
Technically, the image seems a bit pixelated or out of focus. It also seems tilted, but you may have been standing on a hill? It would be better if you were able to get more of the tree top and less (or none) of the road, unless the road is significant to the book. |
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11/14/2003 09:27:01 PM |
| Not very clear. Maybe the focus could have been better? I love the trees and the sun peeking through. |
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11/14/2003 08:18:26 PM |
| Too much fringing. With the camera you've got, you should avoid pointing to a too bright sky. 6 |
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11/14/2003 07:31:16 PM |
| Seems like resolution is low |
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11/14/2003 11:16:47 AM |
| don't get what the focus is...sorry |
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11/14/2003 02:21:03 AM |
not familiar withthe book so....
crooked horison line, car and backgrownd pole cluter all could be fixed with croping.
Like the way you used the sun for a nice lens flair
all in all 6 |
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11/13/2003 09:46:23 PM |
Your horizon is too crooked. It's really pixelated, the sun doesn't add anything but a flare. What were you trying to express with this?
I apologize. If you are a child, find an adult that can help you with your technique. If you are an adult, find someone to help you with your technique and,not to be mean, maybe spend some time looking at some of the past challenges to see what other people like. Look at the ones that didn't do well and learn what people don't like. 2 |
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11/13/2003 12:18:41 AM |
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11/12/2003 10:41:51 PM |
| Did you consider this shot? Why the cars, and the background? |
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11/12/2003 07:53:12 PM |
| This shot is pixelated bad and it detracts from the image. Not bad composition though. |
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11/12/2003 03:46:50 PM |
There may well be enormous relevance in terms of subject matter, however since I don't know the book I'll refrain from commenting on that aspect.
As an image this doesn't work at all for me. Horizon is tilted, composition is messy - lighting is poor with an unpleasant glare at the right. Image quality is also very poor. |
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