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11/19/2003 05:01:35 PM |
Critique Club review:
Hi Bob it me again,
A bit more than what I comment on before.
First, I love the doe. she has a great expression of being in a nice safe place. I think it meets the challenge and I have many sacred spots like this since I'm a wildlife biologist.
As before, I think your shot need to focus more on the resting deer. By cropping out the interfering tree to the left, you eye is not distracted in anyway. I have no problem with the foreground leaves, they add to the the photo as being a quiet hiding/resting spot.
Your colors and shading are perfect.
I hope this helps a bit and you keep the nice shots comming.
Van |
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11/15/2003 12:26:01 AM |
| I love this shot, the serinity, the peace the DOF, the light is all wonderful. The only thing I would have doen differently is a slightly tighter crop on the top so the deer was highlighted more. An 8 |
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11/12/2003 06:59:11 PM |
| Nice tones and colors for a sacred mood, and good eye for seeing her! |
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11/12/2003 03:17:59 PM |
| The foreground elements could provide great framing, but somehow it doesn't work in this shot - the out of focus tree seems to clash with the other trees in the scene, all doing their utmost to detract attention from the deer, which I think was your subject |
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11/12/2003 10:51:10 AM |
| I think there's a very nice photo hiding in there if you crop in close to just the deer and immediate surround. |
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11/11/2003 06:14:47 PM |
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11/11/2003 11:39:30 AM |
| Well framed, good DOF. Excellent sharpness and blending of the subject into environment. |
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11/10/2003 09:54:00 PM |
| wonderful focus on the deer. the rest of the picture is colorful, very organic, frames the subject nicely without distracting. 8 |
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11/10/2003 09:05:46 AM |
| Nice doe, but I would have cropped it vertical to eliminate the close tree, which is distracting the shot. |
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