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11/25/2003 08:40:45 AM |
Critique Club Time
Your Highness,
Congratulations on finding the appropriate book title for your entry!
It seems, though, that the excitement related to your new purchase has led you to show some uncustomary haste I your creation process.
At first glance, I see two âclassic flawsâ and an incongruity you could have avoided easily by:
1°) leveling your horizon (slanted horizons will invariably give a snapshot feel to a picture)
2°) placing you main subject in a more harmonious manner (this is debatable and certainly not an absolute rule but main subjects placed dead center in an open environment rarely enhance a composition.)
3°) moving one step ahead to by-pass the blurry grass patch hiding the cowâs reflexion in the foreground.
I think you will probably agree with me that this is not your most accomplished or well thought of shot and lets keep it at that.
Good luck with your new camera
JJ
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11/18/2003 09:52:25 PM |
LOL too cute! Never heard of the book but it got a chuckle out of me. |
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11/13/2003 12:30:09 PM |
I'd say ground beef... I would guess could have had more impact if it wasn't centrally placed. |
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11/13/2003 09:43:02 AM |
I don't know the book but the image fits the title well, the focus is a little soft for my taste |
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11/12/2003 12:55:10 PM |
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11/12/2003 03:59:13 AM |
is that really the name of a book?! Cool. |
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