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02/20/2007 06:51:01 PM |
| Beautiful sillouhette! Background wrinkles are a wee bit distracting to my eye and make me want to look away from the main subject. My first thought was, what a great take on this challenge! So, you gain a point for that ;) |
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02/19/2007 03:26:06 PM |
| Great symmetry in the silhouette and I like the lighting, wish the background was a bit smoother though. |
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02/18/2007 09:28:50 PM |
| Oh man, if you would have somehow neatimaged out those wrinkles or blurred them away or something, i could see this on the front page. nice work mate. |
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02/18/2007 04:35:46 PM |
| the idea is nice but the bottom is not good |
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02/17/2007 11:59:59 PM |
| I like the idea. But come on... at least iron the sheet! |
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02/16/2007 08:47:36 PM |
| Love it =]]. seriously, this is one of my favorites. i can't even explain why i like it... it just stood out for me. 9 |
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02/16/2007 12:52:51 PM |
| I'm sorry, but what connection does this have with 'School Days'? I like the silhouette approach and the use of backlighting to highlight the bg is good, although if she were a little farther in front you'd have less light spillover on her shoulders, fingers, and cheek. An ironed background would help keep the viewer from being distracted. All JMO of course. :D Good luck in the challenge. |
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02/15/2007 05:00:02 PM |
| I hate to pointout the problem with the wrinkled backdrop (6) |
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02/15/2007 03:56:29 PM |
| With advanced editing this could be a ribbon winner. I love the backlighting, the yellow sheet, etc.. but the eye goes immediately to the wrinkles and lines of the sheet. IMHO If you darken the subject, add more saturation of the yellow and remove the wrinkles, you have an awesome image that will definitely make a nice addition to your portfolio. 7 |
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02/15/2007 08:48:13 AM |
| wrinkles are pretty distracting |
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02/14/2007 08:46:49 PM |
| I just wanted to let you know that I really like the idea of this picture, your set up was good in theory but some of the imperfections are going to kill your score. The sheet that you used has wrinkles in it, as if you didn't know right. One of my first pictures I ever submitted had the same problem and I didn't think that I would get hit as hard as I did for it so I know that you have more than enough comments saying something about the sheet. Anyway I didn't deduct anything for that because I know what it's like to have something like this. Good luck on the voting. (8) |
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02/14/2007 08:09:40 PM |
| Personally, the texture of the background is a distraction - although the line and placement of the silhouette are done nicely. |
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02/14/2007 09:43:11 AM |
| too many distracting wrinkles in backdrop. Otherwise a GREAT capture! |
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02/14/2007 08:04:05 AM |
| I totally love the concept here, but it would have had so much more impact if the background had been blurred out. The wrinkles in the backdrop are really distracting to me. |
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02/14/2007 12:38:43 AM |
| Nice idea, the creases in the background are distracting though. |
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