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03/05/2007 03:54:32 PM |
| Congratulations, Giorgio, on a super score and super image. |
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03/03/2007 01:22:22 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club!
My first impression is that this is going to be a hard critique. :-)
There really is nothing that I can immediately spot as a flaw here.
I like the leading lines created here that draw your attention to the older pedestrian. Both the curb, and the horizontal lines in the building draw your eye to the upper right corner of the image the the focal point of the older man. This is also enhanced by the direction the younger person is looking.
I think you did a wonderful job on the B&W conversion. I like the overall contrast and especially between the man's coat and the rest of the photo. Looking at the comments you received, it seems like you are either a fan of this style or not. You can count me as a fan. |
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02/25/2007 04:49:35 PM |
| I like your general composition, but the car in the background makes the frame feel very crowded. I am not very fond of your choice in post-processing here. In my little opinion, the object of post-processing is to make the capture look more natural, more as the eye would interpret it. Here, your choice to highlight the gentleman on the right hurts the overall image. It draws my eye directly to him and the darkness in the remainder of the frame prohibits my eye from exploring. I like a photo that draws me in and leaves me looking for more. This one draws me to the one subject and then my eye notices the irregularities of the dodging you used. Great start, but I think its just over-processed. |
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02/25/2007 05:56:36 AM |
Great shot, nice contrast between the two figures.
Nice perspective, just being able to see down the leading street. |
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02/24/2007 11:48:17 AM |
| Great image really fits the challenge. I Keep waiting for some one to turn around so you can see their face. |
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02/23/2007 01:28:16 PM |
| really like the processing on this. wish the path ended in just bright light instead of the vehicle. |
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02/23/2007 09:16:36 AM |
| I would have really liked the guy on the pavement to be looking down this way... just for heightened interest level. Great conversion to B+W with nice contrasts. |
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02/23/2007 01:39:19 AM |
| wonderful shot, No faces but it doesnt need it to convay emotion in this one. |
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02/22/2007 11:25:16 PM |
| Good title. Nice detail. 10 |
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02/21/2007 05:02:27 PM |
| The darkness of the picture realy gives strenght to the man sitting on the sidewalk while the elderly person walk on the road... |
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02/20/2007 12:06:45 PM |
| excellent exposure, great sharpness revealing so many details |
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02/20/2007 08:42:26 AM |
| Very nicely done. A good representation of the challenge. |
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02/20/2007 05:09:28 AM |
| Too much PP ruins this shot. Nice capture though |
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02/19/2007 04:40:20 PM |
| Great tonal range. I love the juxtaposition between the younger guy and the older man walking. Nice stuff!! |
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02/19/2007 01:55:49 PM |
| A beautiful range of grey tones. |
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02/19/2007 01:36:54 PM |
| An interesting image with nice details and an interesting composition. Seems rather oversharpened - strong halos particularly evident along edges of walking man's coat. |
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02/19/2007 11:45:01 AM |
| Something alluring about this image... nice moment. |
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02/19/2007 11:05:30 AM |
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