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Shortbread
Shortbread
JonathanWaters


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Challenge: Scents and Aromas (Classic Editing)
Camera: Kodak DX3900
Location: Under the lamp sitting on top of the microwave
Date: Nov 19, 2003
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/90
Galleries: Vintage, Macro
Date Uploaded: Nov 19, 2003

This is my first contest submission. I used a diffusing filter, +10 and +7 macro lenses, printer paper for a background and delicious shortbread cookies!

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Place: 110 out of 188
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Avg (commenters): 5.4000
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Avg (non-participants): 5.1667
Views since voting: 1087
Votes: 230
Comments: 11
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/02/2003 08:32:48 AM
Good idea to use cookies. I think this would be better with the focus on the whole cookie at the bottom left side. The frame is a bit too much and it seems like there is more on the right side than the left.
12/01/2003 04:26:03 PM
love the muted colors....looks good enough to eat!
12/01/2003 03:55:05 PM
I like this as a composition, but it doesn't evoke the aroma for me.
11/30/2003 04:23:56 PM
I like your use of sepia here. I'd have used a deeper DOF for this, though.
11/28/2003 11:52:20 PM
Your props are beat to hell. A better cookie would have improved this otherwise great photo. Terrific use of DOF.
11/27/2003 09:12:53 AM
Fantastic use of low DOF. Would love to see this in colour, as can't decide whether or not I like the choice for b/w. In purely image terms, I do but in terms of conveying smell, I am not so sure.
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11/27/2003 03:12:29 AM
DOF. I think it's ok to have the background out of focus but the foreground is troubling
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11/26/2003 12:12:36 PM
I can smell it! Great shot, best I've seen so far by a long way!
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11/26/2003 11:36:19 AM
I like how you've gotten close up to the cookies and yet still kept some depth to the image. Personally, I like the use of DOF used here, and I also like the tone. Very professional-looking image.
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11/26/2003 09:12:59 AM
just a tad more dof would have helped.
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11/26/2003 02:23:41 AM
I really like the picture visually, but it doesn't convey "scents and aromas" to me. perhaps because I don't know this kind of bread?
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