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03/18/2007 06:17:17 AM |
Hi, Greetings from the Critique Club:
Composition:Love the idea and the combination of the hard lines and angles against the softness and delicacy of the petals and pastels.
Technical:I feel the main let down is the crooked lines due to the lens perspective problems. This can be corrected in PS. The partially greyed background is also an issue...it seems to swallow up the flowers. I feel maybe a lighter background to allow the flowers to control a larger area.
Overall: I feel you are on the right track and I know that next time you will pay a little more attention to the finer detail of the image. Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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03/09/2007 03:29:31 PM |
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03/09/2007 12:46:20 PM |
I like the simplicity of this shot. What is it? |
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03/08/2007 12:27:12 PM |
the flowers are distracting from an other wise nice and clean composition |
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03/08/2007 08:34:11 AM |
very happy colors, makes me think of easter |
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03/05/2007 08:31:23 PM |
Kind of cool, the lighting is excellent. |
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03/05/2007 03:25:12 PM |
Great capture - Just seems a little awkward to look at though. Must be the angles. |
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03/05/2007 01:49:26 PM |
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03/05/2007 11:31:19 AM |
hmm...Ikea sells glowing boxes now? |
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