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03/28/2007 08:53:42 PM |
Hello Grandad,
There are a few things I would like to point out here. First, the face board on the roof, it gives the (optical) impression that it is coming out of your should & again at head level. By moving a step or two to your right would reslove this. Secondly, the pad lock again gives the (optical) impression that it it hanging from your arm, not the door. The watch on your arm there is giving off some glare that is a we bit distracting. Finally the lighting, you could have used a reflector or bounced some flash off the barn at an angle fro below to lighten up the shadow on you face. Over all I like the shot. Hope these little tid bits hlp you out.
Frankie/Las Vegas |
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03/23/2007 07:28:43 PM |
| I'd like to see more light on his face. |
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03/22/2007 01:47:08 PM |
| this cries for a filling flash or a reflector |
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03/22/2007 06:11:29 AM |
| I like the composition but I'd like to see more light reflected on his face |
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03/20/2007 01:46:03 PM |
| Could have used some fill flash or a reflector here. I imagine at this point in the voting stage you've probably already heard that. :) Good luck. |
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03/20/2007 12:26:18 PM |
| I don't like the lighting, but everything else seems fine! |
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03/20/2007 12:12:27 PM |
| IMO, IMO <---which is almost worthless most of the time, LOL. Dodge, and burn the hell out of the barn, and give his face a bit more light. GL. |
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03/20/2007 08:33:47 AM |
| Strong light from the right leaves the face too much in shadow. Needs some fill-in flash or a reflector to balance up the shot. |
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03/19/2007 07:10:35 PM |
| Brightening up his face would help. So would cloning out the dust streak (r whatever it is) up in the top left corner. |
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03/19/2007 02:01:32 PM |
| turn him towards the sun to avoid the shadows on his face or use a reflector to fill them in ... |
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03/19/2007 10:32:29 AM |
| need some light on his face to help it pop |
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03/19/2007 09:58:32 AM |
| HA! Great! lots of Character! |
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